Beautiful and so very eloquent!

that was so very nice. it was well written. i liked the wording. there might have been a grammatical error here or there, a wor forgotten in a sentence now and then, but nothing big. it was really great.

Wow - that was really powerful and heartfelt! Very, very good and enjoyable to read!

Awe! This is so adorable! I love the analogy you thought up to their relationship and their little dance around each other for so long.

That was absolutely fantastic. I love your writing style.

As always, you never fail to amaze me with the talent you have for writing. Wonderful job, Angel. All my love...Beebo.

Once again, you remind me of the importance of non-verbal communication, but you also managed to add subtlety to the mix. VERY well done.

Totally sweet story!

Aw. I like this one, too! Again, good metaphor.

Em

I just found this and I’m appalled that I didn’t stumble onto this wonderfully poignant and beautifully written one-shot earlier. You have a wonderful way of letting the description flow effortlessly – from the imagery of the two of them skidding around their feelings, to the actual scenery of the moment. Bravo.

I think you captured a lovely corner of the CDG relationship that is subtle. Personally, I think subtlety is the most challenging and the most emotive form of describing a new relationship - it makes the reader visualize better than any outright confession or action of love. Kudos to you for capturing it so brilliantly. I don’t know why this doesn’t have more reviews, but I adore a one-shot like this that makes me think and so expertly captures the moment and the characters.

I look forward to more form you, hopefully something a bit longer sometime. Truly awesome job!

Lovely.

good.

I liked the analogy and it fit them

Maria

That was lovely, I hope you write more.

a beautiful metaphor for a really delicate character sketch. I think the feeling of being just a bit removed from the action (Oddly obtianed from the present tense the story is in..) gives it a very nice sense... it feels like the reader too is walking on ice.