What the heck! Did she like die or something? Freaky! Also, I made a story almost exactly like this, without even reading it. It's called Coma! Great minds think alike, eh?

all i have to say is WOAH!

Youch! That was all a dream? Bummer!

Wait i don't get it she dreams all of that and then wakes up and dies becuse of her dream guy

It's all right, nothing compared to your other stories. But yet still good. I wish you would continue, but obvisly you can't.

this was much deeper than the stuff you usually post. not as silly. but i liked it- the end especially. keep it up! i like this aspect of your writing style.

how depressing! :-(

That was quite depressing but it was really well written and a good read.
Imagine if that really happened. :O
Good job and thank you!

I think you should continue this. It's a very good idea, and you could do a lot more!

ahh!! that's so depressing! jeez. but really good. is this like..."she woke up and it was all a dream"? or something? anyways...wow, very very depressing.

That was very depressing. Renee was a little harsh too, if I ever go in a coma, my mother had better not be that harsh when I wake up! XD Pretty good, though I'm not a fan of third-person.
~ Melissa

That was a really good chapter, and thinking out ehat the next chapters are going to be is probably going to be really hard. Good Luck!

that's depressing. but an interesting idea...i like that.

~fluffy

whoa.
I always thought, what if my whole life a dream and i suddenly woke up?
If i found out, that.. i would probley die too.
good story

ah, a dream induced by a coma that sends bella into a heartbroken state that graces her with death without her love of her life, even if technically he wasn't real here ...