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TutorGirlml
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseOh. Wow. I absolutely loved it. There are some great lines in it, and I loved the vibe between them. A good Flack/Stella fic is one of my favorite fics to find, and this is definitely one! I kept thinking, that whole episode, what a good friend Flack was. I think my favorite part of this was, "He had known he would end up telling her. It left a bad taste in his mouth, but he didn't want any secrets between them. He had some pretty deep feelings for her, and wanted to take them somewhere someday." That just about sums it up perfectly, along with this one, "YOu're a good friend, Don," she told him, and he felt his stomach clench. She had told him that once before, years ago in a hospital room. He just had to figure out how to tell her he didn't want to just be her friend anymore."
Loved it, just great!
KickassScot
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abuseOk, so being in the UK, I havn't actually seen the episode yet...however, I thought this was well written and captured the characters well...Thinking of continuing...please :-)
citeyoursource
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseGreat story. =]
THE CSI'S JUNKIE
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseGreat story, I hope you will contiune to their dinner and more. :-D
ThnksFrThMmrs87
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant. Very well done; I can see this happening on the show, for real.
Trixy2
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseYou cant tell who he is talking to. It was confusing.
hockeymom
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abuseI love your use of adjectives "penetrating green eyes" and "sanitized version". Very good. I also like Stella drinking what he is. Toltalli IC, Stella is definitely a lady, but she's also one of the guys, no girly drinks for her. Also how Don tries not to look at her, but can't help himself. LOL! The boy is whipped and don't even know it yet! Hope you continue this. I hate one shots. They plant seeds that never get to flower.
mandy9578
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abuseThis is a good post-All in the Family fic. Thanks for showing us what Flack was thinking through that fiasco. I love that the Flack/Angell coffee thing here wasn't a date at all. Yes, Flack is a good friend. Can't wait to read more of your stories.
TessaStarDean
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abuseI love it :) I love it that Stella knows Danny will tell Mac. I love that Flack can't keep any secrets from her because he wants to take their relationship deeper. I just love it :-)
notesofwimsey
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abuseI love the way you have the conversation working between them - two people who know and trust each other, and yet are still not completely honest with each other.

I can feel Flack's weariness and concern, and Stella's sharp relief that things hadn't gone worse.

I think this is a near perfect scene.
Aphina
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abuseHey. i really enjoyed your take on how Don handled things after the that ep. I like that it was Stella he talked to. I also liek the uneasy relaitonsihip you paint between them. he's not sure wheatehr she's acting as a supervisor and a friend, and I think that's important that you remind us of that.
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