Aw, it's so cute,Link is all innocent like, Linebeck is a Captian Jack kind of guy, and he softens up, and now ,they're like brothers! I'm sorry,I got a little carried away!OMG! Too adorable!☺

I love the dabble... i like how you did the ending in linebeck's POV

What an excellent snippet of Linebeck's thoughts post-game! Linebeck was one of those characters who just kinda grew on me as the game progressed. It was nice to see him evolve, and this story just captures perfectly what he might've thought after all was said and done. Kudos!

I've got to say, this is a magnificent story you wrote! It truly captured Linebeck's post-feelings and it fully convinced me that this was how he felt. I've got shining eyes after reading this!