 Chargone 7/23/08 . chapter 10yay chapter!
nice to see a couple of things Tomo actually IS good at, rather than just bragging about. still, plants and breakfast food, who'd have thought it? [besides you, obviously
and Yukari stole Nyamo's pillow [and entire bed] again, huh? business as usual there, and still funny [and annoying, for poor Miss Kurosawa. one has to wonder how she puts up with it, really. masochism, maybe?
yeah, not much else to say. i liked it) |
 yellow blaze 7/1/08 . chapter 9Really great story so far, please keep updating! Are you going to do a chapter about Kaorin or Chihiro? -just out of curiosity- and who woulda thought that osaka'd be the first one to get a bf... |
 winterhearts 6/23/08 . chapter 9Great chapter as always! Oh, and chapter 8 made me laugh a LOT. Keep up the good work! |
 Chargone 6/13/08 . chapter 9a caboose is also slightly different from a 'Guard's Van' though they serve similar purposes in both cases, at least from memory, they have a secondary break control for the whole train, on freight trains tended to carry armed guards back when trains were slow enough for bandits and the like to be a problem, and on passenger trains often carry the larger items of baggage. the main difference, from memory, was in size and design.
nice to see another chapter of this fic... i just found it again when going through my fav/alert list [i can't remember which] and started at the beginning once more. that was yesterday, today, new chapter. that rates a 'Yay!
think you need to take a look into the idea of pronouns though. few paragraphs start off[persons name[did thing]. [same person's name[did thing]. [same person's name[description or something like that. conjunctions also help if you want to cut down on the number of pronouns without killing the flow like that.
but yeah, 'tis a good fic. insert an expression of anticipation regarding it's continuation here. |
 Li Daisuke 5/16/08 . chapter 8Nice work xD!, i read more or less some parts of the chapters and the little "Tomo Yomi" story is very funny and touching xDD! Tomo is my favourite character fo the series and her interaction with Yomi is a good plot(i always imagine Tomo has that senstive side in the very bottom of hers, very well adapted xD), ok i really enjoy a re-encounter of the "Bonklers" team xD! |
 Oriminally 5/15/08 . chapter 8I love you for updating!
Since you're not going to give me an explanation I'm going to harrumph and move on.“She said they are going to abandon her, but who?
... yes who? ARE THEY GONNA FIRE HER?
NO T_T she's like Tomo many years older. |
 Fade to Osaka 5/15/08 . chapter 8Poor Nyamo. Yukari singing row your boat made me smile XD |
 TheoneandonlyKaorin 4/13/08 . chapter 7It's nice, I like it. |
 winterhearts 4/9/08 . chapter 7wow! this whole story has been great so far...write more! |
 Oriminally 4/9/08 . chapter 7YAY I've been waiting so long for this chapter, almost all the authors on my alert list have been dead for two weeks or more. XD I love Sakaki...I'm allergic to cats so I feel her pain!
P.S Did you know in another manga (i forgot who), Sakaki actually becomes a philosopher and Kagura an anthropologist! |
 Oriminally 3/24/08 . chapter 60 FINALLY! I've been waiting forever to read more. But I'm glad you waited until writer's block has passed. I really love Ayumu's bond with her papa _ I can't wait till she goes on a date!
Riyo |
 Supreme Kimchi 3/13/08 . chapter 5this is one of the best AD fics ive ever read! Everyone's still the same, that's what I like most. Please write abotu Sakaki int eh next chapter! |
 Oriminally 3/7/08 . chapter 5XD omg this was so funny. It made me remember that relations episode...even I was staring at the TV in total shock. Didn't Minamo also have an arranged marriage thingy? *May be confusing this* hm. Anyway please update more quickly next time . |
 Fade to Osaka 3/7/08 . chapter 5“Stick to Gym teaching instead of Physical Education.” Yukari snorted
Heheheh, that made me laugh. I was confused by what was going on in the beginning, but it was a good chapter otherwise. |
 Serencity 2/26/08 . chapter 4Wow, this fanfiction is awesome! I thought Chiyo-chan would go to Harvard, but John Hopkins is good too. It's one of the best! (my dream is to go there...hehehe) Anyways, I hope you update! This is really good! |