This story is an insult to the English language and literature in general. You fail.

I wish something like that would happen to me. I do like this guy, but he is WAY to popular! ...His name is Derek ironically... Wow... Except I'm not even average... sigh.

UPDATE SOON!

this seems to me as to be pretty good! i don't mean to be mean but could you possible make the chapters longer? well i'm really enjoying this so do update please!

really good cant wait to read more :]

i like ur story so far..ur doing a good job =)

good luck with next chapter..