 crawfish4 2009-12-05 . chapter 26ADORABLE STORY! LOVED the ending! Jell-O OMG that is amazing! |
 alice autunm cooper 2008-12-04 . chapter 26aw! so cute it was awsome |
 VampireSithLordDarthTryphineus 2008-07-30 . chapter 26wow. this story was very gripping. i couldnt stop reading it. i loved it. good job. cant wait to read ur other stories. |
 VampireSithLordDarthTryphineus 2008-07-29 . chapter 13WOW! this story is amazing. when i read twilight i cant stop smiling and this story is the same way. i love it. sorry i didnt review the other chapters. i wanted to read more so i skiped that part. i havent finished the story yet but i will. cant wait to read more!
ps I LVOE THIS STORY! |
 caww 2008-06-27 . chapter 26I went back to favorites and found out I never finished reading Toxic!
It was a very good ending.
Wow Bella is so powerful...no wonder why she was wanted.
I'm glad she remembered Edward and new the Cullen's wanted her. I'm glad she had been humming too by the wall.
What a relief... to have a happy ending.
Looking forward to reading your other stories.
caww |
 debbie-lou 2008-06-15 . chapter 26wow loved it
the twists in the plot were great :D |
 Kason08 2008-06-08 . chapter 26Hahahaha! That was a great ending. Good job. I really liked this story. I was really shocked at Marcus being the doctor. I was like.. :O my jaw literally dropped. Hahahaha! Just great. Hahahaha! |
 Stormey Winds 2008-05-07 . chapter 15He put them in order by year and then by personal preference, (just thought I'd tell you) |
 Luvntwilight 2008-04-21 . chapter 26This was an excellent story. Can't wait to read more of your stories. Thank you for all of your efforts! |
 Andrazuria 2008-04-15 . chapter 26hehe yay jello! |
 jenski 2008-04-15 . chapter 26YA They lived happily ever after. I love a happy ending. Nice job. |
 Amber is a Jasper's girl 2008-04-15 . chapter 26I loved it! But, you already knew that! It's an amazing story! You did really well for it being ur first fan fic!
Amber |
 Miki-Teh-Goddess-O-Spazz-Ness 2008-04-15 . chapter 26LOL! That was stinking halrious! I love it. Positively brilliant and every other praise I can shower apon it without sounding like a stalker. |
 Hey-Hay13 2008-04-15 . chapter 26hilarious ending |
 bloodredeclipse 2008-04-15 . chapter 26Aw that was so adorable! Have you ever hit your head on the metal detector? I have but I never had to be interrogated! I really loved the last line because it was random and kinda adorable in a cute little way. I think that you did great for your first fanfic and I can't wait until you update your other stories! |