Reviews for Heather's Shadow

Reviews For: Heather's Shadow

lunarXangel 2008-07-16 ch 10,	abusewow! your story is great! And I'm happy im not the only teenage girl who can't wait for this new batman movie!! (well other than one of my friends.) well I guess thats all i have to say! ;P lol
Chicki Babie 2008-07-14 ch 10,	abuseaw kool story so far realli likeing it plz dont stop writing this fic i will be dissapointed this story has potential plz update soon :D
Pinstriped Armani 2008-06-11 ch 1,	abuseGood start; it's a little cliche though...and Heather reads like a Mary-Sue (but then again, I find all original female characters caricatures of their author counterparts, being a comic-purist; I don't think that authors should add unnecessary characters to the original )...otherwise, the actual writing/descriptions etc are well done...you definitely have A LOT of potential as a really good author :)
cloudleonsgurl 2008-06-04 ch 10,	abuseAh, so Bruce suspects something about Heather. This is proving to be an interesting turn of events. I always thought Heather would find out about Bruce first, but this is awesome. Keep up the great work.
ClassicalBrunette 2008-06-02 ch 10,	abuseyour story is GREAT! keep up the good work!
cloudleonsgurl 2008-05-18 ch 9,	abusePoor Heather, I see that seeing that woman sent her on a emotional rollercoaster. I wonder if Bruce suspects Heather is Shadow? Good job.
midnightsprite 2008-04-15 ch 2,	abuseSo swet!
midnightsprite 2008-04-15 ch 1,	abuseSo col!
Built on the Horizon 2008-02-09 ch 5,	abusehey, nice story. Keep at it, your doing great. Tip, you might want to get a BETA (a person to read through your stories before you upload them) to find typos and spelling mistaktes, I found a few while I was reading. I know exactly what you mean about homework in year 7! It doesnt get any better, but it doesnt matter in the long run anyway! Keep at it, I can tell you're getting better even in five chapters!
cloudleonsgurl 2008-02-06 ch 5,	abuseI liked the trouble that Heather is going through now that she is moving out because it makes her emotions become more real in a sense, and now I am eager to find out how she is going to take it living in Wayne Mansion! Great chapter!
Xewioso 2008-02-05 ch 5,	abuseGreat idea for a story, but I think it might need a little work. I admire you for updating so quickly, but I think you might want to find someone that would beta or just grammar- and spell-check for you. I'd be happy to help, if you want, and there are plenty of other people that would be willing to do it. Seventh grade? I'm impressed. When I was in seventh grade, there was no way I could keep a fanfic (or any story, for that matter) going for more than two chapters. In fact, I still can't. :) Thanks!
cloudleonsgurl 2008-02-03 ch 4,	abuseNice! I wonder what choas will ensue when Bat finds out Shadows true id! Anyways love the story, and hope you will you continue.
ArwenGreenEyes 2008-02-03 ch 1,	abuseHi! I just read your story and it's promising, although I have a few suggestions. There are a few typos, so maybe you might want to proofread or get a good beta. Also, you could slow down the pace a little bit. I see two or three good chapters' worth of information in this one short condensed chapter--don't be afraid to expand and describe! I think you have a very good premise and I hope you enjoy writing the rest of your story! Arwen

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