nice-

WHOA... :O
I've never read OroKarin smut.
Damn, great fic.
You did an amazing job!!
I LOVE SasuKarin <3

omgosh! XD

i love this story!

let's see,,


i definitely hate sasukarin ('cuz i'm a sasusaku fan. ♥)! yet, i do like the way you described karin's lust and longing for sasuke.

in short, the plot's really good.


if you plan to continue this story's plot, well, good luck!:D

...Wow.

That was painful to read. Poor, poor Karin. You got so much emotion into just a few hundred words. Great job.

Very interesting. Very original. And very dark.

AND, you're going to my favorite authors now.

Very interesting and original...I need more SasuKarin, XD!

...well, i guess orochimaru's gotta initiate his followers somehow...

he does seem like the kind of person who's stick his peep in anything that moves. FUCK! i just thought of orochimaru penis...EW it's probably a snake...*barfs*

DIE! FUCK SASUKARIN!

This was awesome. I fucking love this pairing so much, and~

This really captures what I imagine Karin's feelings are to Sasuke. Brilliant job I really like it. Thank you for writing this.

Very dark. But i liked it. Maybe because Sasuke is pictured quite heroic. Wanting to help others,caring and stuff. And of course it's cool that this time he gets raped by the enemy not by his best friend(like in some of your fics) This fic was inspiring for me. So,thanks for writing it :)

Write more!
I LOVE SasuKari
I don't know why more people don't... >.<
But yes, more chapters... please?

Wow. Just, wow. That was the most exotic peice of literature I've ever read. This is such a great story! Is there going to be mroe, or is this a one-shot? I'll be waiting for updates, please continue!

Loved that. Fav moment was at Karin's realization...and Sasuke's unwitting remark that showed his true inclinations. Great job, and your sentence structure really made the reader feel the panic and tension. Bravo!