update man plz

plz hurry up make make a new chapter!

this sould be good and is it a naruxhanabi?

i like it cant wate for next chapter.

Ok.. It was original, and the idea interesting. The flow of the story was a little rushed - you could have slowed it down with descriptions and a bit more backstory for Naruto. I will say that I think Kakashi took it too well. He's lazy, but not the type to admit his 'teaching', (and I use the term loosely), was wrong.

I do want to see what you can do with this premise, though. And, if you consider this a prologue, then it's not bad. Caliko

interesting you going to have him be like kabuto with the whole bloodline thing.

good chapter.

Nice job...How about making it a Hanabi/Naruto pairing...We don't get enough of them with a cheery naruto... They usually are angsty naruto.