Nisha~
This is very lovely, I like your run-on sentences and how they add so much impact to the fict. I esp like this line: "You’re only real, he tells Sora, for as long as I stay asleep."
It's like telling us that Roxas is the real /one/, not Sora. Kind of twisted, which is what I like.
Keep writing? :D

I love the way this is set up. Interessting.

Another gut-twisting piece. I like the struggle that Roxas has, and the pity of him being overshadowed by Sora, who reaps the benefits of talking to and having contact with Kairi. And when she calls him a liar, that's great too, the fact that he's not truly, not wholly himself because Roxas is inside of him. Overall, another great job!

Whoa.

Beautiful.

You emerge with such innovative theories! Brilliant! Just brilliant!

I've always wondered what the other side of the story could have been. Call me weird if you like, but I've always believed there was a parallel-universe. So what if Roxas really was the real one, but he just didn't belong in Sora's world? I really liked this. Thanks for writing!

This is sad

i never thought of this before, what a
great idea. [: fabuluouss

as usual

You know, I have never thought of the whole Sora Roxas thing like that before. I love stories that peel your mind open like that. :3 Great job!

This was just..liekWHOA. Wow, the concept of this drabble is awesome! How Roxas is the real one and Sora's only there as long as Roxas is still sleeping. Cool!

"Kairi is always laughing and Kairi is always smiling and Kairi is smiling and laughing right now and at least that’s right."

"Her smiles and her laughter are all for Sora.

Her words are all for him."

Luh-huv it!

So, like, you already know how much I love this, but this is made of so much win, and it's so awesome! ♥