i love the candy stand part. It just stuck with me.

I liked it.

I think you're the only person on who gets inside of the KH characters' heads the best and most accurate way possible. Your imagination and thought flow out into writing and produce something so flawless. I don't care what other people say, or how you critique yourself. This is flawless and I applaud your work once again.

What an interesting perspective!
Admirable ;)

Very nice
but Roxy is mine hahahah :P

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This was freaking awesome. I liked the bit about the photographs being made by Namine.

Aw .. This is sad. But it's true. I've always picked the dream world over the real world. I have yet for a dream of mine to come true.

]: namine...

i luv this song btw [;

Wow, so romantic and yet sad too! This is truly another masterpiece of yours. You don't have to use a lot of words to convey the scene and point across. It's really a gift.

" Enemies, because hate is the easiest emotion to learn. Mysteries, darkness and myths, because every real place is full of them." I love this line! So true!

"And, at the last minute, when nobody was there to see, she made the girl at the candy-stand: the girl who watched and loved him from afar, but she couldn’t say a word." This is cool! I'd never think about this!

"We all want to pick a dream world over a real world, don’t we?" Wow, what a twist, how they need to pick the real world instead!

"just so he’d know the truth of fading away. He was always meant to, after all." Awesome ending! You're like the queen of endings. And beginnings. And everything in between. ^_~

Beautiful. ♥