Oh my God.
I /forgot/ how much I love your writing. (Because, you see, I actually typed out 'Oh my God' instead of the shortened, OMG. XD;; That says something, I think.)

ANYWAY, I love how you can make something so short into something so big. There's just something spiking your words. As if the webpage is like a sun and I'm holding a magnifying glass and it's scalding my eyeballs. In a good way. Plus AxelKairi is good for eyeballs too.

8D WEIRD SIMILES OVER.
Keep writing ♥

"She hated how she had his name memorized before he told her to commit it."

Um. Awesome, much?

Obviously I adored that line.

Almost as much as I adored the emerald city comparison. Almost.

And, of course: "Can you make her forget /him/?"

This was win. Pure and simple.

i loved this.

i loved how axel is like 'can you make her forget him too"

and the emerald city line. and the line "she hated how she had his name mermorized before he told her to commit it"

amazing. relly.

faving this yay

and I think i got it wrong, didn't I?

LOL.

YEAH, I'm still a n00b at what exactly drabbles are and AREN'T. So do forgive me if I got it wrong. C:

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LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE.

gosh. This has to be thee best drabble thing I've ever read.

it was FANTASTICALLY AWESOME.

So, yeah, I remember that my renegade monkey story is still sitting halfway finished on my comp. XP I'll finish it eventually, even if the contest is already done and even if you don't care about renegade monkeys anymore. XD I'll send it to you soon, maybe during spring break which is in two weeks for me.

Now, onto the important stuff...heh, the review itself! Gosh, I don't know where to begin. I don't want to gush on and on but all I will say is that you wrote this so well...it seems effortless for you to come out with these gorgeous drabbles. The form and they way you wrote this really made the piece special. The fact that you have to lay down the truth before you can change it...that is awesome. And how you slipped in the part about having Axel's name memorized and about his emerald-city eyes, and that she chose HIM...GOSH ZANISHA, you are the best writer, hands down. My heart wrenches when I read what you write...it just provokes so much emotion, and it also reminds me of why I love Kingdom Hearts so much too- that there is so much to it, especially if people like you interpret things certain ways, or create your own stories about it, or even just with writing about one simple concept or scene. It reminds me of why Kingdom Hearts is my favorite game. Thank you for doing that. :)

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'nisha this is amazing and gorgeous and perfect a-and can I just say that 'smirk' totally owns me right now. Especially that last line.

You can create such emotion and lyrical beauty out of so few words and it is AMAZING. Seriously. ♥

- Pixie

You - you wrote Kaixel.

I THINK I LOVE YOU.

'smirk' was my favorite of the two, and I would quote certain lines, except I've found that I adore them all.

Hm...not really sure if they connect in any way, but cute Kaixels nonetheless.

whoa infuriating isn't it?

Wow that was really good.I hope theres more.

axiri yay [:
all caught up noww ♥ keep updating!! lol

Wow, Smirk was amazing. That whole thing was so well written, and the way it played out was perfect! I love how in Rash Decision Namine kept saying how she hated Axel, yet she choses him. Thanks for this mass of uploads of your awesomeness! ::whee::

Absolutely lovely. I really like the parallels between the Kairi-Axel relationship and the Namine-Axel relationship.

Cool ;D