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Shanster 1102
2008-10-28 . chapter 6
I really enjoyed this story. I am adding you to my favourites author and story. Keep up the good work
Drakonis Aurous
2008-09-18 . chapter 6
The scene with spiders was very well done - definitely frightening and action-packed - way to go Ron!
So Ron finds the MMP item but Kong finds out and gives chase.
After a small chase, then a confrontation, and then Ron speaks to Kong and well makes a new friend.
The scene with the small spider was hilarious!
Great story!

- Drakonis Aurous
Drakonis Aurous
2008-09-18 . chapter 5
Nice "George of Jungle" reference. Somehow I could see Ron filling that role.
Looks like Ron is adapting well to life in the jungle.
Nice scene with Kim and Ron seeing each other even if it was briefly.
So Kong's cave seems to be the source of the MMP.
Ron fights MonkeyFist, Kong seemingly intervenes and Kim gets stuck in a spider web. That's some cliffie.
Great chapter.

- Drakonis Aurous
Drakonis Aurous
2008-09-18 . chapter 4
Nice way to start this one with a good ole fashioned monster rumble.
Looks Kim is not the only one with dinosaur troubles...
Funny scene with the discovery of the car.
The velociraptor scene was done very well from both Kim and Ron's point of view.
Excellent chapter!

- Drakonis Aurous
Drakonis Aurous
2008-09-18 . chapter 3
Great chapter.
This one having a greater degree of description than its predecessors.
Whoa, Ron's reaction to Will Du's comments was unlike Ron but Will had it coming.
The description of Kong was very well done. Huh, Kong seems to really care for the welfare Kim feeding her and bringing her to the waterfall for a bath.
But to complicate matters, MonkeyFist on on Kim's Trail and attract the attention of a T-Rex.
Nice Ron usings speak cockraches ability to help him in his efforts.
Very nicely done.

- Drakonis Aurous
Drakonis Aurous
2008-09-18 . chapter 2
Great chapter.
So Ron's going on a rescue mission to save Kim from a bunch of monkey worshipers and a giant ape? Kim Possible meets King Kong? Nice.

- Drakonis Aurous
Big Dog
2008-07-30 . chapter 6
Where did Kim get the ice pack from?
Mr. Wizard
2008-07-12 . chapter 6
Great spider sequence. (I so do share Ron's spider issue!) Good to see he can handle the big ones, but what can he not do when Kim needs him?

Loved the power of the amulet. Perfectly used by our heroes, of course. Really enjoyed the new take on the Kong story.
spectre666
2008-07-10 . chapter 6
Nice finish, and very Ronnish too. (G) I might hesitate if I were Ron, though. GJ's track record on keeping things (Pan Dimensional Vortex inducer anyone?) out of villains hands is not the best. Thanks for a lot of fun on an adaptation of an old favorite.
Spectre
noncynic
2008-07-10 . chapter 6
Yep, that's Ron, all right. Good story, nice ending, not judging
the grammar or spelling errors, which were few. Nce for Kong to have a happy ending, too, someone to play with all his own.
Comet Moon
2008-07-10 . chapter 6
THAT WAS GREAT.

Though I a wacky Idea of Ron using the power of the Amulet to increase the size of one of the normal size lady gorilla's in the area, the misfit of the group, that Kong was Mutated or spawned in some form from

Doubting Imaculet conception

Evil grin

Hey the guy is probabley lonely

What if Ron or Kim sensed that and a return to Kong sequel comes about

Great story

Ja ne

Jim
whitem
2008-07-10 . chapter 6
So you have to have bad breath to speak to Kong. ALso, nice visual of Ron face-to-face with Kong.

More good fight scenes...

Loved the last line from Kim...
Danny-171984
2008-07-09 . chapter 6
Awesome story Captain. I'm a little disappointed that Ron didn't keep the amulet...but oh well...I'm glad that MF got what he deserved. That bastard. It seems that Kong got a new toy...LOL! Ron, buddy, he did become strong. Stronger by the send I would say...but to be knock out by a spider?! Sigh...that's Ron alright. Until next time.

Danny
Kwebs
2008-07-09 . chapter 6
Great ending to a great story Cap. Thanks for the fun read.
TwilightGD
2008-07-09 . chapter 6
congrats on another great story. Got the Ron-man down to a T. had a lot of fun reading it, lotta laughs too.

Write on
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