Honey, that was amazing work, very moving and emotionally evocative.

It's lovely to find that quality work still exists on this site.

Give yourself a tremendous pat on the back.

Well done.

ohh he could of become a ghost then he could stay permently.

Very, very good. It's still hard to imagine D'D suicidal, but you did it well. Might I suggest you flesh out the part after he closes the door on the students and give us a little more info. on how or why that changed his mind in the face of everything that made him suicidal in the first place?

*sniff*