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STAILS565 4/14/12 . chapter 16
SSSSÔOO NNIICCEE)
Olympian-King 3/25/12 . chapter 17
It ache my broken heart that this still isn't updated but none the less I shall wait for the day when it is!
Horatio'H'Caine 1/9/12 . chapter 17
are you ever going to finish this story i would really like to see what would happen next
bookworm 5315 5/31/11 . chapter 17
oh my RA! that was realy intense. i was just looking up random puzzleshipping fics and i find this awesomeness! please update! the forbidden season is my favorite yugioh season and i'm completely in love with this fic. don't drop off of the face of the earth!
CherryLicious Blossoms 7/6/10 . chapter 3
Yet again, another great chapter! Keep up the good work!)
CherryLicious Blossoms 7/6/10 . chapter 2
This chapter was nice! I love it! The little scene with Atemu and Yuugi was so sweet. This definitely is keeping my attention.)
CherryLicious Blossoms 7/6/10 . chapter 1
This was a nice alteernative chapter for Season zero work. I also lik the last name you picked for Yami. Very original.)
princessfrankie 6/1/10 . chapter 17
I love this story! It puts such an orignal twist on the manga! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!
FanficFemale 9/18/09 . chapter 17
This is a really awsome version of season 0 and I hope you update this very soon!
Yami-no-Tamashii 9/5/09 . chapter 17
Aw, it's so cute when Yami stammers and gets all flustered in front of an idol. xD Poor Yugi got jealous!
I never really understood how exactly Aileen was able to control Anzu in the show though. All she said was 'hold that pose', and Anzu listens? /scratches head/ It doesn't really make sense.
At least Aileen fought and won with dignity...even if she DID use hostages. She was my favorite game master.
Please continue! This story is awesome!

Darkie
mazokuyuusuke 9/2/09 . chapter 17
Hello, there! I've been reading this story of yours for awhile now, and I just want to say that I LOVE IT! It's so good! Your writing style has really improved since you began, and it's really expressive! I love the fact that it's based on Season Zero. I loved that season. Yami was so badass and Yuugi was so adorable. _

I've been into Yugioh for a long time now. I'm almost 20, and I still love it. It's an awesome Anime. And this is an awesome story! I hope you are doing well. I miss your updates. But I'm not gonna bother you to update. I'm not like that. I wait patiently until it comes out.

It's worth the wait. _

I'd love to talk to you sometime! You have MSN, right? On there, I'm
Well, see you around! I hope you had a good summer! Bye-bye! _
Streaks 5/25/09 . chapter 17
I was another one of your reviewers! I now have a new account and I still keep a close eye on your story! :D I am hopelessly in love with the puppyshipping pairing in this story and even at the littlest hint of them, I squeal my butt off.
I'm not gonna say, "Oh, if Amun is what keeps them appart, GET RID OF HIM!" But, I wish Seto would just suck it up and deal that he cannot beat Yami! So just date Jou already! Geezes.
Anyways. Update soon please!

Streaks
The Danvers Girls 4/11/09 . chapter 17
Anzu, bi? Shock horror disaster!

Nah, I'm kidding. . That's pretty cool.

Ahem, ahem! Where was I? Oh yes... I loved it, nakama! Your chapters are long, rich, and a joy to read, let me assure you! You're up there partying with my favourite writers.
Ooh, and reading the mini-preview of the next chapter... Bwaha, using Yuugi as the target of Imori! Nice job I was expecting the classic 'Yami has his soul stolen and Atemu saves him' tactic, but your version is so much better! .

Sorry for leaving such a bare review this time, but I'm just about to hop out and do some shopping. n.n' Fantastic story as usual Kagome! And yeah, let's talk again on MSN that was so much fun!

Sammi
Heart Girl 3/28/09 . chapter 17
This is so cute! I love it a lot. Please hurry and update more.
Atemu Yugi Lover34 3/20/09 . chapter 17
hmm... I liked this chapter... only Yugi's jealousy (although a must) is kind of annoying me cuz I don't see Yugi as being that way. Great chapter though... sorry about this review. I don't mean to complain. Just something I've observed. I think the next chapter is one of the chapters in the graphic novel I got to read... I missed a lot of the beginning stories... I watched most of the anime before reading the manga.
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