nice story!! i luv it! ^-^

cool story icant wait to here the rest and if nafina will fall for nic it just so exciting

good please go on

I like it...even tho I don't like Jake much. BUT KEEP WRITING ITS GOOD!
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I love it!

I forgot to mention this before but Alice can't see werewolves, since they are unpredictable and all.

Aw, its so sad and dramatic, I guess that was the point though, silly me, hope you update soon.

Really good. Write more. However, I am a bit confused about all the new characters. Develop some of them, like Mary and, obviously, Nic. WRITE!

oh, my first Twilight fic and so far i'm wanting MORE MORE MORE!

lol, love it

great job getting all of the characters right