ashes.to.beauty 2008-08-23 . chapter 15Oh my goodness, this story is simply fantastic! I can't even tell you how much I like the idea and how you play it out. The couples are spot on for my tastes and your writing style is great.
Update as soon as you can, because I am DYING to read the next chapters :D
-Ashes |
LiRiNCaNdY 2008-07-23 . chapter 15action packed goodness. hmm i'm wondering where's the love:[ lol what happened with Marron. and the PanUub-ness. still a great chapter |
The Anime Wolf 2008-07-23 . chapter 15oeh ! cool ! Though , I wanted to see pan uub ... Just love that couple. update soon! I need some pan uub luv , screw uub's traditions ! lol |
Brookheart 2008-07-23 . chapter 14YAY! Thank You! |
The Anime Wolf 2008-07-23 . chapter 14:o OMG ! update soon ! This is a great story ! Please update soon ! |
LiRiNCaNdY 2008-07-22 . chapter 14these plots relly remind me of a good DBZ episode everything falls into place. it seems like you really put thought into this great job:] |
LiRiNCaNdY 2008-07-22 . chapter 13AN UPDATE! yes!! this chapter really helps lay out the plot you have developing keep it up:] |
The Anime Wolf 2008-06-22 . chapter 12you should realy update ! it's an aswome story , you don't see much UubXPan fanfics , please continue ! |
Brookheart 2008-05-31 . chapter 12I'm bored. More Uub+Pan please! |
Musette Fujiwara 2008-04-27 . chapter 12wow...
Trunks is discovering what happened to his dad... while his father is probably already fighting with his own father...
And Goku told everything he knows to hichi... while they were enjoying themselves...
I loved it... |
LiRiNCaNdY 2008-04-25 . chapter 12:[ i'm sad because i can't click on the next chapter damn! please update i LOVE your story it relates to all of the characters :] i love PANUUB:] MORE! MORE! thanks |
LiRiNCaNdY 2008-04-25 . chapter 1omg it's the story!! i read this on mediaminer but i thought you just stopped.:] glad to discover it's on |
Musette Fujiwara 2008-04-19 . chapter 8aww so cute...
I loved it...
how he told her he doesn't care about her being old...
and how he managed to get uub to profess his love for his graddaughter... |
Brookheart 2008-04-17 . chapter 1(Singsong) Uub's in love! Aw...I hope Pan loves him too! Update please! |
Alc Fluteo 2008-04-16 . chapter 8This chapter was so incredibly sweet and touching! I love how Pan and Uubs "relationship" or building of one contrasted with Goku and Chi-Chi's long standing one.
I've never seen people write very much about SS4 Goku...NOR what Chi-Chi might think about it so this was really refreshing and nice. Also, I can't remember if in a previous review I stated how I really love the Uub/Pan pairing but that no one ever writes it. I think the two go together really well.
And FINALLY! Someone writes a good Pan SS transformation story (I know it's not just about that...but you get what I mean right?). Just because she's 1/2 or 1/4th Saiyan and a girl doesn't mean she can't transform!
Lol, enough of my boring review. I just wanted to tell you how much I love this story and particularly this chapter!
Can't wait to read more soon! |