I haven't read "Puppet" but I liked this story just the same. Wow, so sad seeing Dean go down like that and being evil. You did a great job with all that angst and raw emotion. I could see this a having been a considered option for the show, even, or at least, having Dean evil and Sam struggling to kill him for a while. Not so quickly, of course...and maybe even saving him in the end. But wow, you didn't hold back with anything there. Good job.

Saved his brother? He destroyed his soul! Dean deserves a helluva lot better than that! It was a well done story, I just wish you had warned us with "tragedy" in the description.

Work god damn it, work!

I know you're online right now even if it is only nine o'clock! Get your lazy ass up and work again! Only God knows how long its been since you've last written.

Candy!

Listen to me and don't call me a damn hypocrite at the same time.

Very good, I like it and I understand it, which is a lot since some people just trail off.

Hee hee, love you, Rain.

Wow. Great short fic! Sweet. :)

good story

A good writen short fic. I was hoping it would be longer, but it had a good ending. Im a Dean fan so Im really hoping that Dean don't die at all=P hehe

I Love it! But i don't want Dean to die... lol

So sad...poor Sam losing Dean agian! Great work on this story!

Candy! Just read both chaps. And thought both were fantastic. Good to see Joel pop up again. When Sam pulled the trigger... so heartbreaking *sobs*

Great fic.

- Suze

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Awesome story-how sad tho to think that it was Sammy who had to be the one to take out his brother that was now a demon!

Kya The first one I've read so far with the new epi. LOVED IT! Poor Sammy, Poor Dean! I got kinda teary!!
A way you could do the centuries thing and still have Sammy could be like just after human Dean goes to hell hi body gets possesed by FutureDemon Dean, who was sent back by Ruby to Help Sammy. Cause you know that no matter how long you torture Dean he's still gonna protect Sammy. (this sound vaguely like terminator but with Demons)... Anywho YOU ROCK! Please write more!

aw, that was still good, even if it was really depressing...great job!

Awesome!! It's fitting that Sam killed Dean to save him. Great job!! :D

Wow. That was heartbreaking.

Good job!

Kat

love it
want more! so post already,ok please!