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Mewtwo
2008-07-09
ch 3, anon.
abuseYour still the best Bionicle author out there, Saya. ^^ I hope you graduate and do well in whatever it is you choose to do.
Tera Hunter
2008-05-09
ch 3,
abuseWow! I read this chapter two days ago but never got a chance to review. I just skimmed it again and it still blows me away. You are GOOD! I practically thrive on your work! I'm almost done with my next few chapters, so I'll try to update soon!
J. Price
2008-04-30
ch 2, anon.
abuseway to go with these stories!! I just can't stop reading because they are so amazing!
Zim'sMostLoyalServant
2008-04-27
ch 3,
abuseWell worth the wait. While you're right, this is just a filler, it definently gives us plenty of important information.
I remember Reha from "Heir to the Flame." Glad to see her making an apperance. And apparently, in an important role.
And I gotta admit, this Koriseva guy is a real @ss. On the other hand, I really wouldn't want to be him when Teridax finds out he's the one who stole that Turahk. He'll probably become a midnight snack.
Poor Silarial. First she gets hit over the head, then she's got to deal with that jerk Icarax. What's up with her anyway? Is this a problem she'll be dealing with later?
Also, I like how you (sorta) included another scene from "Good Times." And will you be pairing Aki up with one of your OCs?
Keep up the good work.
Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.
Tollian
2008-03-11
ch 2,
abuseYou updated! Yay!
Good begining. It's a nice introductory for the characters and I really want to know why they took Malvado!
Hm . . . not much more to say except I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
DataIntegrationThoughtEntit...
2008-03-08
ch 2,
abuseYo.

This looks interesting.. poor Malvado though. I kinda like him.

Oh, and Within Temptation's cool. Love that song.
Sir Loin The First
2008-03-08
ch 2,
abuse*Is scared by some of the Redwall references* Shoulda goen with Vallug instead of Eefera. xP

So why'd Malvado go away? Any ulterior motives, or did he not want to spook the kids?

*Sits back, eats a crumpet, and watches the whole thing umfold*
Arya-Metru
2008-03-08
ch 2,
abuseAhh!! That was awesome Saya!

^_^
Zim'sMostLoyalServant
2008-03-08
ch 2,
abuseWell worth the wait.
Glad you're going to be keeping some of the OCs from "The Road Not Taken" who aren't involved with the Toa Metru. We've already got Malvado, and from the look of things, Mano and Shay will be showing up (Mata Nui I love that pairing).
BTW, glad you incorporated a few scenes from "Good Times." Very nice. Plus you managed to introduce us to some of the kids that you didn't in that fic.
Can't wait to see who these people are who have kidnapped Malvado. And for future characters, I have pretty much only one request. If the Brotherhood shows up, use Silarial. I like her.
Keep up the good work.
Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.
Sir Chris Orr
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseMust...see...more...

The first part was probably the best fanfic I'd ever read overall so knowing how good your first part to the story was, this is gonna be wicked sick. I look forward to seeing Matob and Roodaka clash in a cat fight. *cat scowl*
Tollian
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseWow, the sequal already? ALRIGHT!!
Well, the story already sounds exciting. I can't wait for the first chapter.
Tera Hunter
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseYAYAYAYAY! I'm so glad you decided to continue, I practically LIVE off some of your stories, and I can tell this will be another one of them. Please get the Chapter up soon! Luvs-Tera
Sir Loin The First
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abuseBlah. Bout time I reviewed some stuff here.

How did Pridak manage to get out of the Pit? Water-breather. o_o

The destiny quote is rather nice... you make it up? Personally though, I see it as just a choice.

Plus, Xians aren't conquerers. They're just... builders. Roodaka was a bad example. :P

I really don't see TSO ganging up with Makuta. It's just a matter of precedent.

Or seeing Pridak taking a Toa under his wing. But that's just me.

SLTF signing off.
Shay Moonsilk
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abuseI love it! Can't wait to see more!

Oh, and I love Mano/Shay so much, I gave them a daughter! Her name is May. She likes playing with the puppets Mano makes her. lol.
DataIntegrationThoughtEntit...
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abuseYahoo, a sequel! :D Sweet.
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