it was a good story but a little fucked up that you made ranma a killer like that...he would have fought it with everything he had. but like i said it was a good story and i hope that you update soon

That was...unexpected.

I love the Story...but where will it go from here? Who killed Akane? Organization or one the Great Three? How evil is Ranma? How much Self-Control has he in his AB-Body Will we meet his other Fiancees?

I had...NO IDEA that Ranma was going to be an A-Being! Yes, I figured that the number one was Ranma, but I was trying to think of another reason them being the same. Being an Awakened Being...Well!
I find it quite refreshing to be surprised by a plot twist. That doesn't happen near as often as it used to!
Thanks for writing this-really!
Even if eating people's entrails is just really, really gross.

This was neat. I haven't seen or read anything about Claymore before this, but my interest has been peaked so I'll get to it pretty soon. I am wondering though what would happen after that lead off. While that really seems to me to be a lead in to the rest of the story, you have it end there and completed... Good job anyway.

Nice story. I'm a little disappointed that Ranma gave into the yoma desire for guts though.

This story was certainly entertaining to read. Certainly darker than your usual stuff. Great action, great imagery, and well written dialog.

Holy crap, this is an amazing beginning to what is certainly going to be an amazing story. I really hope you continue this man! The wait for new chapters for this is killing me! I like it so much that if you didn't accept anonymous reviews I'd actually log in just to pay my respects, and I haven't logged into my account in 4 years!

This is really good! I so want another chapter to your other story but...I also want another for this one. Curses!

OM NOM NOM NOM

Very different this is. I'm a little disturbed.

You slotted Ranma and Ryouga into the Claymore world in an interesting way, and Ranma the Voracious Eater is so damn creepy... he seems to embody the best bits of the Claymore manga itself. Very neat.

This is so freakishly wriedly entertaining. Just one promblem the decendents of your siblings are not your decendents.

Holy crap, that was the most epic story I've ever read.

You managed to portray Ranko as both familiar and mysterious. The mystery of her origin and motivations kept me hooked throughout the entire fic. And the twist at the end was truly shocking, but in a good way. I desperately want to see a sequel to this.

Trieste is a lovable character, and her inexperience is perfect for explaining some of the finer details of the Claymores to readers unfamiliar with the series. Her sense of shock and unreality as she dies is truly... touching, for lack of a better word. I really felt sorry for her. She's so innocent, and was just unlucky to get caught up in something much bigger than herself. You also did an amazing job of fleshing out all of the other Claymores, more so than the actual manga does IMHO.

Your attention to detail and expressive, creative writing style when describing things is the finest I've ever read in fanfiction. I was drawn into the story immediately, and was so engrossed that I had finished reading before I'd even realized it.

This world you've painted is absolutely beautiful, and the characters you've filled it with are interesting and engaging. I particularly loved Kodachi. You described her exactly as I'd imagine she'd behave if she were changed into an inhuman monster.

ive read this last month.. haha.. PLEASE UPDATE... i likke it