Ahhhhh! This is soooo sweet! I love this!

xoxox

Very well-written and quite creepy! Great job._

That's amazing. And kinda creepy. But really, really amazing. I really like that Cybertronians don't have a real understanding of time.

Oh wow. Seriously, wow. I love your take on Bumblebee so much! The idea of such a selfish Bee who won't let a silly thing like mortality get between him and his Sam is just... *squeal*

very interesting premise and one-shot.

O, loving the devious Bee, definately an awesome twist on the Sambot!

So sweet and sad, this side of Bee. Loved how you did this 'series', with the others as well. .

Awesome in a creepy way..

Or is that creepy in an AWESOME way?

Regardless.. I love it!

Yeah, this is kinda creepy in a stalkerish kind of way.

Whoa... now THIS is an eye opener!

I never would've suspected Bumblebee of doing such a thing! But then by the looks of things neither did any of the other Cybertronians or Sam.

I liked how you did the unexpected like that! Hope you write more like it. Once in awhile it's good to get a unexpected story!

*blinks* Whoa! You mean Bee somehow managed to manipulate a situation for Sam to become immortal in some sense? As in he was turned to a Cybertronian? Or some type of Cyborg?

But you did a wonderful job on this one. It was rather unique in what Bee is willing to do to keep Sam nearby.

your bumblebee is so disturbing. his intentions are completely adorable, but so selfish, and that's so different from the stereotypical innocent-to-the-max way bee is usually portrayed. um...i love it!

A very obsessed Bee. I like it!

Good

Hmm, a very interesting twist on the usual SamxBee fandom, indeed. So, it was Bumblebee who initiated Sam's transformation via the AllSpark, not his jamming the thing into Megatron's chest. It appeals to me that you showed Bumblebee's dark, selfish side in this, unrepentant in his decision to keep Sam forever. But one thing I've always wondered in these kinds of fics is whether or not a human mind can truly handle living forever? You know what I'm saying? Can Sam mentally handle living each and every second for the next hundred years? The next thousand years? Hundreds of thousands? Or would it someday simply be too much? And if it one day came to be too much for Sam to handle, I wonder, what would Bumblebee think of his decision then? And while this fic was short, it was all that was necessary to convey Bumblebee's motivations and emotions. It's truly awesome, it really is. More, please?