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silver sniper of night
2008-06-01 . chapter 7
Ouch, nicely angsty. Its good, all of these are really good. Although I think I need to stick some happy music on now lol
Full Metal Fangirl
2008-05-31 . chapter 7
great chapter :)
Full Metal Fangirl
2008-04-18 . chapter 6
i almost cried but then someone IMed me to go play tennis with him XD
thegriffin88
2008-04-16 . chapter 1
I know this is gonna sound nit-picky, but if you take out the 'was' here:

“Don’t worry about it.” He said. He didn’t want to see her like this, drunk depressed, the apartment was in the same messy state as he was in.

it sounds a whole lot better. Other than that it's a great little piece! :)
Full Metal Fangirl
2008-03-16 . chapter 4
chapter 4 almost made me cry too T_T
Full Metal Fangirl
2008-03-16 . chapter 3
i was so close to crying after i read the last sentence of chapter 3 T_T
Pickles the Great
2008-02-17 . chapter 3
Loved the wrap up to this, it made me reread it a few times to finally get it, but whe!! Great writing.

~Pickles
'-'soni13'-'
2008-02-10 . chapter 2
thank you for the angst!
Pickles the Great
2008-02-04 . chapter 2
:D Angst. My favorite part of the Royai relationship. Thank you for capturing it perfectly.

~Pickles
RR forever
2008-02-03 . chapter 1
Just in time Riza called Roy. Silly man... Sweet fic!!
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