 silver sniper of night 2008-06-01 . chapter 7Ouch, nicely angsty. Its good, all of these are really good. Although I think I need to stick some happy music on now lol |
 Full Metal Fangirl 2008-05-31 . chapter 7great chapter :) |
 Full Metal Fangirl 2008-04-18 . chapter 6i almost cried but then someone IMed me to go play tennis with him XD |
 thegriffin88 2008-04-16 . chapter 1I know this is gonna sound nit-picky, but if you take out the 'was' here:
“Don’t worry about it.” He said. He didn’t want to see her like this, drunk depressed, the apartment was in the same messy state as he was in.
it sounds a whole lot better. Other than that it's a great little piece! :) |
 Full Metal Fangirl 2008-03-16 . chapter 4chapter 4 almost made me cry too T_T |
 Full Metal Fangirl 2008-03-16 . chapter 3i was so close to crying after i read the last sentence of chapter 3 T_T |
 Pickles the Great 2008-02-17 . chapter 3Loved the wrap up to this, it made me reread it a few times to finally get it, but whe!! Great writing.
~Pickles |
 '-'soni13'-' 2008-02-10 . chapter 2thank you for the angst! |
 Pickles the Great 2008-02-04 . chapter 2:D Angst. My favorite part of the Royai relationship. Thank you for capturing it perfectly.
~Pickles |
 RR forever 2008-02-03 . chapter 1Just in time Riza called Roy. Silly man... Sweet fic!! |