THIS IS GOLD! Please continue this story! It is a flower waiting to bloom (sorry if that sounds cheesey) THIS IS A VERY VERY GOOD START! please continue it.

who was that Edward or Jake? I like EdwardxBella so if it was for Jake then it was good but I dont like the pair.
XD I loved it with out that knowledge but you should still tell me.

Wow! Talk about AWESOME!

is this JAKE talking?
or Edward?

hm... I don't like is and I will not read new moon or eclipes again because this is my version of what would happen to Bella so don't ever tell me that my story isn't good or i will tell u that u r a bad writer... And besides i just started writing so give me a break.

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KEEP WRITING!
I CAN TELL FROM THE PROLOUGE THAT YOUR FAN FIC WILL BE AWESOME!


I LOVE EDWARD CULLEN!