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cherryspark101
2008-06-13
ch 1,
abuseWhen you mentioned that we don't even know Angell's first name I laughed out loud. That's great!
chrysalis escapist
2008-06-13
ch 2,
abuseWell, I think you've won them one new viewer :)
Loved the banter between Zoe and Wash, and Mal sounds great, 'Wouldn't want the customer to think him slovenly.', AFTER they have seen him :D. Loved how Jayne changed his mind SO fast, and the little connection to this site again with Wash and Book having free time because they don't always appear in the fics :)
Looking forward to more!
chrysalis escapist
2008-06-13
ch 1,
abuseWow, great start, I'm amazed at all the little so true characteristics you picked out about them. Loved the discussions about what things they would like to have changed (or confirmed) in their lives, and of course the reference to some of the pairings on this site here :D.
I'm so glad that the writers' strike is over but glad too that it has inspired you to this fic, and that this fic isn't over :)
Blaze709
2008-06-13
ch 1,
abuseI love it! Genius! And Firefly - I love that show! Mac and Mal in the same story, what more could a girl ask for?! :o)
jordinajamaica
2008-06-13
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE IT!! GREAT IDEA! Keep writing!!
Update soon!!:P
lily moonlight
2008-06-13
ch 2,
abuseHi, I read your first chapter ages ago and was really intriguied by it, so it's great to see a new chapter, really enjoyed this, very funny, I loved Mal. Hope you can add more soon :)
Booth-Bones4life
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseABSOLUTLY BRILLIANT ORIGINAL IDEA! Can't wait for more...please update soon.
charlie12
2008-04-13
ch 1, anon.
abusetihs story is so good.
i can't wait for you to update.
this has to be one of the bestsyories i have read so far
Open hearts catch dreams
2008-02-23
ch 1, anon.
abusesorry about not being signed in.
I beg of you, update this soon. as in really soon!
I love it, great fun and a brilliant idea!
I love Flack at the end asking for irish coffee a stuck elevator and some of Danny's pool table!
Mac trying to handle it 'by the book' and be serious is just so him!
Please put up the next chapter!
fatkat
2008-02-08
ch 1,
abuseOMG - I love the idea! I wasn't sure what was going on a first especially with a genre of General/Humor and then such a very intense start! Talk about bringing characters to life! Can't wait to read more!
xdannyx
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abuselol this story was great cant wait 2 read more!
TutorGirlml
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseThis is a great story start and I'm really intrigued by how it's going to go from here. There's so many questions left unanswered and storylines dangling and I can't bear to think that they won't eventually get answers. I'll try to PM if I get any great ideas or have thoughts on this. I'd love to see a one-shot detailing where Flack's wish from he and Angell's interaction over Irish coffee with an elevator and some of Messer's pool table could go. :) I watch CSI:NY, but I write Criminal Minds, so if that's any help let me know.
Lady Pandora
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely love this fic. What a brilliant and original idea.
I especially loved Flack's little whine: Angell and I were supposed to go get coffee!

:)
SaraLou
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseOK, I had to laugh at this...

According to news out today, a deal might be reached as early as next week :):):):):) Cause I want answers to the questions and scenarios you have painted in here lol!
TatianaMik
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseLOL. I love it! Damn the MAN! Four lousy cents. You can find strike news at UnitedHollywood DOT com. And I love Serenity/Firefly. Fox was crazy to cancel it. I think you should do a chapter with NCIS. I love that one too. Let me know if you need help with it.
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