It was a good story and also very well written...but...but I did not really enjoy how the story end. 5 years without her? 5 years is so long for those who love each other.

Anyway I put you as my favorite author for the quality of your writing.

Good chapter.

Good chapter.

Another good chapter.

good chapter again.

How can he dare?

Good chapter

Great story. I read to get away from my "REAL" life. Your story really took me away.

Thanks

the tests are awesome but the last one is more like a trick. i'd be pissed off first cos a university cannot have a fake fire alarm. ah, but it's fiction and Prof Cullen obviously sent out a memo to let everyone but those in is class know that, right?

a relationship with a member of the teaching staff is against university policy. it would have made sense if Bella was still in high school since she wouldn't be his student. plus, the idea of being in love with your uncle is highly disturbing, adopted or by marriage (your mother's sister's husband) and taboo...and she's still a minor! but yeah, i get that this is FICTION and thank god for that, cos it'll be so wrong! Nevertheless, it's been pretty funny. i love the bickering. Passes the time at least

love this story

this story started great, but man that was a sudden end. It almost seems like you got bored and then wrapped things up. I also don't get it, Edward is her uncle so her parents don't know where he lives? Most universities have webpages and if not that departments you can reach and verify if someone is a faculty there. Sorry but the last 2 chapters made no sense. The whole Jacob/Tanya ending was very cheesy too . I think you have great potential if you don't go the "deus ex machina" route : )

Dear God, Allah, Jehovah, Buddha, and the whole gang...this story is amazing! When I got to Chapter 33 I had this pang in my heart that has never happened before with ANY story that I have read (and I have read some sad stories). This is an amazing story and you are an excellent, talented, magnificent, truly and genuinely an amazing writer. Thank you for such a great story and for giving me the opportunity to read it.

loved dis story a lot...god it was sooooooo awesome...plz write some more...pm me if possible n tell what r u doin these days...any story in future?...(plz say yes)..

that was weird byt goos i liked it an d going ro look for more stories

love it