very interesting story line, great use of charactors looking forward to next chapters

Very interesting story, and very relevant to today as well, music does shape our youth, and we have to be ever-vigilant in watching and listening with them. I hope you finish this story soon, I am looking forward to reading more.

I'm getting into this story now. Great chapter keep it going. Well done. Love that Captain Baker and Hayley sounds like she's got a bit of spunk about her.

OMG! What are you doing to poor Jon? Wow... there's some seriously messed up peeps out there... Good lord! Poor Jon! What a horrible place to be in: physically, emotionally... wow.

I hope those rap artist's get what's comin' to them! And tell me Jon's okay!

Wow... Lt. Baricza! I love it! :D Yay Bear! LOL And poor Captain Baker. That really sucks for the CHP. Darn rap lyrics. I like your message about the music. Its too true.

Poor Hayley! Those kids are stupid and her daddy raised a smart girl! Hold that head high Hayley! You're better than those stupid so and so's! :)

You started another story before finishing Deadly Game! WOMAN! Don't make me hunt you down and hurt you! :p

Great first chapter... I love me some Captain Baker. :) He is still trying to save the world, isn't he? Gawd I love that man. Now, go finish your first story so I can devote my time to this one! LOL

Dayna