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| Aly the Trickster 2008-03-28 ch 1,  | abuseNice. Likey likey. A little choppy, but still pretty good. I would have stressed more of the conflicting emotions in Misa, but hey, your story :D |
| Kara 2008-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved your story and all, but I disagree with the ending. If there's one thing Misa has, it's loyalty. However, you still did get the LxMisa point across quite nicely XD |
| AGENT JAZZ 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. And I liked your Misa. This is saying something, as I have a huge grudge against her in the manga/anime. I couldn't be her number one fan -- that would only happen on the Armageddon. But yes, I liked her and that takes a lot. So yes. The alternate timeline thing is really interesting, and it has a lot of potential to become a multichaptered fic. No pressure or anything, but I'm just saying incase the plotbunny ever attacks you. How L humanifies Kira and Misa's shock and disbelief at Kira's true morality was captured perfectly, and I could practically see Misa's faith in her hero simply vanish. That was my favourite bit. And Misa's difficulty in choosing between L or Light was wonderful and it seems so... so canon. Because I think Misa really WOULD have chosen L if Kira's true nature was revealed to her early on. Absolutely brilliant. I find it hard to find good LMisa fics around D: So yes, keep up the great work, yeah? :D |
| -BabyBubby- 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuse... |
| Ninja Shen 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseooh, will there be more chapters of this? colour me intrigued. I just love the slightly-AU stuff like this, and LXMisa is one of my favorite pairings. |
| gladdecease 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseOoh. This would be a really cool AU, fully fleshed out. Not that it isn't really cool as-is, but the idea is really interesting. And the fact that I have a weakness for LMisa the size of a small country doesn't hurt. *favs* |
| Nkitty29 2008-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI demand a sequel! At least the first meeting between Light and Misa. That's the only thing that is bothering me right now...How will Misa feel seeing her former hero? Has L really convinced her? Other than that a very interesting fic. |
| AGENT BANG 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseBWAH. AND HERE I WAS. THINKING I SOMEHOW TURNED INVISIBLE. Because you're cute. Yes. (Se*xual favors, yes?) And who said anything about firearms? Slightly sharp objects work just fine. But seriously- KYAA. That was so amazing- I do not know this 'Light' you speak of. But- KYAA. I LOVE JOO. |
| Diaph Annie 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseL is a lying liar who lies! GASP. Truly excellent job, as always, Ren. I love your Death Note ficcage. And you can actually make L sound like the genius he is. Five points to you. |
| HPBabe91 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseHeeheehee, L! “Why?” He reached for a stick of pocky. ...it is kind of sad how much I flailed at that last word. Why is that I only like your guys' Misa? (And does she really say Misa-Misa?) Anyway, Ri, it was love ♥ Amazing job, doll. |
| tikaani 2008-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abusecool, this is really good. Please update soon! |