Wow... Spike is channeling Dru something serious. Hopefully Xan will snap him out of it.

Hi

I feel so sorry for Xander and Spike. I hope Buffy wake up and relize that Riley is a creep! Sometimes Buffy can be so stupid when she does not want to take reputable.

Why is Giles sudnaly worryed for Spike? Does he care about Spike will being? I hope that Spike will find his poweres soon.

I have some ideas for your story "Demon Pups"

-I think it would be a good idea if the Higurasi took the demon childern to a family that could teach them about self defienes and how they should not ues vilenes in every conflict.

-It would be best if they don't try to modeiz the demon childern b/c will have to back to the feudal times.

-Sesshomaru could have Koge comled some taskthat could prove that he would be a good mate for Inuyasha

-What does Inuyasha thinking that Sesshomaru & Koga were talking about him

mimi

God that was dramatic. I was in tears by the end of this. I also would REALLY like to see Riley suffer! Damn idiot! Hurting Spike like that! He should have his insides torn out! Or he could have all of his friends turn against him! But I want him to suffer! You make one dramatic fic let me tell you that! And Xander seems to be the only one that cares for Spike! Will Spike ever go back to being sane? Or as sane as he was previously? And will he ever get that blasted chip out! God I just feel so sorry for those two! And what about buffy! Is she going to find spike...I hope not...I hope that she gets to watch Riley suffer. Mwhahahahahahahahaha! The last thing is I really hope Giles falls back in love with Ethan. I think they make a cute couple. Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

great story. please update soon.

Great story so far. Keep it up. Please update soon. :):):)

This is an awesome story! I really love how orginal and interesting the plot is and I can't wait for more. Please update soon.

Love this story! Please update soon!

Hey, neat start. I think it's really cool that you've (kind of) inverted the traditional places of Zander and Spyke. It looks like you've got a really cool story going here.

Wow. This is a very interesting story. Poor Spike. What he's having to go through to wake his powers. Since you're already so very AU, isn't there any way to get him to a neurosurgeon and get that godawful chip removed?

Recovering from the multiple rapes is going to take ages anyway you go, but getting the chip neutralized will at least give him the potential of defending himself. I'm eagerly looking forward to reading your upcoming chapters. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

ahh..more, please hurry up! )