 sumbunnyluvsu77 2009-12-03 . chapter 13AW!! loved the story! |
 WolfKeeper989 2009-11-09 . chapter 13THat was good. I liked it. |
 Madame Starfire 2009-07-28 . chapter 13I loved the story so much! Gizmo got served. |
 Haine-hime 2009-07-14 . chapter 13Love the story!! Awesome job! :D |
 Inkbl0t 2009-05-11 . chapter 3To be honest, I wasn't really expecting much from this. But the title wasn't too bad, and the summary was way more decent than most TT fanfics out there, so I decided to take the plunge and so far I haven't regretted doing so since. The fact that there are no paragraphs and just line after line after line is the only issue I really have, though.
What I'm more focused on is the misery and frustration and self-loathing of Jinx. Her angst supplies a murky pool of throat-aching catharsis that I like to indulge in every once in a while (to keep myself from thinking about the "what-the-hell-happened"'s of my technically non-existent love life). Anyways, I think your portrayal of Jinx is definitely more than acceptable, and the diction of her thoughts is very, very good. I'm totally loving it.
And because I'm really impatient to continue with the story, I'm gonna end this review. Right now. Because this fanfic is truly progressing swimmingly and it's only the second chapter.
So, yeah. Write on! :D |
 purpleanime 2009-05-02 . chapter 13awesome!! loved it! and kinda ironic that it had 13 chapters...you know 13...unlucky number...maybe i'm the only weirdo that noticed it! |
 rimahikofangirl 2009-04-16 . chapter 13man the way you discribed her whith her new hair and clothes is great!i can imagine her with 2 ponytails down and it looks a lot better then horns!also how you added the twilight thing is freakin cool! |
 broadwayfreak123 2009-03-31 . chapter 13Wow. I faved this like a week ago, and have been reading through (unfortunately I'm very busy, so it took me a while) and this is amamzing! I swear it deserves, very much, to be on my faves list. Well done. |
 takenattheflood 2009-03-21 . chapter 13 Great fanfiction! It's not what I usually like in KF/Jinx fanfics (which is humor) but the dramatics were very well written. Except, the word banter in the last chapter, I felt, was a little over used. But other than that, it was great. |
 justplaincrazy8 2009-03-21 . chapter 13oh. my. god. it was only now that i realized that you actually updated! and finished the story! ah! if i could, i would hug you right now! i loved this so much! i'm going to miss it, seeing as it was one of the rare fanfictions that made me cry! i absolutely adored how you ended this and btw, i love the twilight reference! you are an amazing author and i look forward to seeing more of your work! bravo!
-juztplaincrazy8 |
 Angelfly06 2009-03-16 . chapter 13aaw!! yay! it's adorable and was well thought out too! |
 KF fan 2009-03-16 . chapter 13Nice chapter. I especially liked KF playfully frustrating Jinx. |
 CGBabydoll 2009-03-16 . chapter 13This was awesome, I loved reading it. |
 unnecessary 2009-03-16 . chapter 13 Excellent! Hope your AP tests went okay (mine are impending demons on my mind as well...). |
 Little Miss Juliet 2009-03-15 . chapter 13Aw how cute! Yay for happy endings!
A re-post huh? I like it the way it is, but if you say so!
Hope to read more of your work in the future! |