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Reviews For: In The Valley
QueenNefertiri.Amun
2008-06-13
ch 1, 		abuselove it nice job KEEP WRITING PLEASE

i like the Oracle part at the end nice job with your flashback
Amy Beth McK
2008-02-02
ch 1, 		abuseLovely moment! I like how they both dismiss the Oracle's prediction, and I'm guessing this ends up being the child in the film, so they were right! I love his tender and protective reaction to her news. I love these two. Sniffle!
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