Ladyroo88 2008-11-02 . chapter 1I love it!! more please! |
Fk306 animelover 2008-10-24 . chapter 2this is great I look forward to more, though its been a month >.> xD |
Calli-co Cat 2008-10-08 . chapter 2I adore Harry Potter crossovers (don't ask me why, but it's usually just crossovers with Harry Potter I like, with a few exceptions) and I adore this crossover as well! As I have only recently become a fan of Yu Yu Hakusho (in the past month) and have only seen the first two seasons (never read the manga), I have to say, that I like what you've done with this story so far. I understand everything about the YYH world, and what few points I didn't quite understand or remember, you explained beautifully. It's a well written story, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! I understand that life can take a while to let you get to stories, but I hope you manage to continue this story quickly! Keep up the good work!
~Calli |
BladeMaxwell-GoddessofDeath 2008-10-07 . chapter 2I love this newest update!
you've done an awesome job!
kudos! |
Lanari 2008-09-27 . chapter 2^_^ Hey! Awsome story so far! I can't wait for Yuuske to meet Harry! UPDATE DANGIT! |
Firehedgehog 2008-09-21 . chapter 2if not botan/harry, definately a brother/sister sibling thing forming |
Estheriana 2008-09-21 . chapter 2nice more please |
Retse 2008-09-21 . chapter 2o fascinating! keep up the great work! (plus the last line was brilliant... and so very true!) :D |
Haunt of twilight 2008-09-20 . chapter 2This is pretty good. I can't wait to see what happens with the egg. I am disappointed that it's not slash, but I am going to give this couple a chance. I look forward to the next chapter |
cuteness 2008-09-20 . chapter 2 Wow, I'm really glad you updated (or I never would have stumbled upon this gem!). Your story is off to a great start! It's really nice that you seem to have a plot in mind (unlike so many other YYH/crossover authors). I also must commend you on your writing ability - well done indeed. I am eagerly looking forward to your next chapter installment (and I hope it wont take seven months to be posted - though I'd rather quality than speediness - and real life does get in the way).
Cheers! |
917brat 2008-09-20 . chapter 2wow just wow. This is great and i can't wait till the next chapter please keep it up cause this is a great story and i really want to see hoe Yusuke and HArry met...oh and just how did Harry kill Voldermort and just how powerful of a wizard is he? OH please update soon cause this is a great story! |
Falling Right Side-Up 2008-09-20 . chapter 2Oh! Very much looking forward to seeing the interactions between Harry and Yusuke. Update soon! |
Lady Avarice 2008-09-20 . chapter 2Really glad to see this updated. Great chapter length.
I'm willing to bet one of the eggs decided to attach on to Harry regardless of what anyone else thinks. I mean come on, it's Harry! I really like how you're playing Botan in this. Nice, real, and a sweet individual. It's not done often enough.
Keep up the great work. Hope you update again soon! |
FoxySpirit 2008-09-20 . chapter 2Wow... Nice chappy :)
So Harry meet baby Puu aww... Will Puu remember Harry or recognised him?
By the way how long has Harry been dead?
Hope you update soon (hint)(hint) |
GeKARimTIyAlI 2008-08-17 . chapter 1It's well-written, but it also gives me the impression that you wrote this out very quickly. Thus, there are some spelling/punctuation mistakes :) Although, I'd say it explains the setting well for people who don't know Yu Yu Hakushou - such as me. (unlikely that someone won't know HP, to be honest) The story's well-paced and easy to read too, so I think it's not bad. Not bad at all :)
Promise fulfilled! In case you didn't realise, it's your unofficial Japanese tutor here *waves* I'd rather you call me Geka, cause it is online, and I try to be cautious… just in case. Anyway, good job with the fanfic! |