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| InMemoryofFredWeasley 2008-07-14 ch 10,  | abusewow. Lily and Scorpius are now in my top two favorite cuples. After Lily and James and before Remus and Tonks. I've always supported it, but now it's my second favorite. You're a really good writer |
| xJALDx 2008-07-11 ch 2, | abuseI can't read this. A. I'm too scared. B. I don't like thinking about the war. Even if it's just a book. Sorry, i would read it. But... i'm a "pansy" As my brother would call it. ♥ |
| madd09 2008-04-25 ch 10, | abusewell congrats you had a great idea and turned it into a great story |
| Silversaz 2008-04-19 ch 10, | abusehi im not sure whether ive read this story b4... even if i hav, im reviewing cos i cant remember it. well done, uve done this really well. keep up the good work! |
| MatoakaWilde 2008-04-08 ch 10, | abuselmao Harry and Ron's bet cracked me up. good story, as you can see I read it straight through. :) |
| MatoakaWilde 2008-04-08 ch 9, | abuseso cute, sorry lame thing to say in a review, but still, charming last bit. |
| MatoakaWilde 2008-04-08 ch 3, | abuseeven know I get all sad about the Battle of Hogwarts...very interesting concept you've got going on. |
| MatoakaWilde 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseooh wonder what comes next! I love Lil/Scorp, can't imagine it any other way... |
| sunburnt 2008-03-26 ch 10, | abuseawesome story! i love how you've portrayed Lily and Scorpius! |
| Gin's Comettail 2008-03-20 ch 10, | abuseI really liked that story :-) I feel like you tiptoed through a bunch of cliches and did so really well - time-travel, the whole antagonistic teasing eachother-turning to love thing, big brotherly protectiveness... it was a nice, fresh story :-) I do feel bad for their kid being named Rain though - surely Scorpius of all people would have a hang-up about saddling kids with awful names? |
| ANGEL-OF-DEATH6 2008-03-01 ch 10, | abusevery good, solid story line nothing too corny great dialogue, by the way James is just ron all over haha. It was excellent, well written and overally, a really good story. |
| Drusilla Braun 2008-02-22 ch 10, | abuseI really love this. Great job. |
| sheen shan 2008-02-22 ch 10, | abuseooh clever clever chapter...somethings we may never understand...that was deep!...anyway I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! IT WAS BRILLIANT!!...so keep up the good work and continue writing!! Sheen shan |
| HoVis 2008-02-22 ch 10, anon. | abuseNice ending, though I'd have liked to have seen Draco's reaction as well as Harry's! I liked Harry saying "I won't tell him not to" r.e. James breaking Scorpius's legs, lol! Very well done, HoVis |
| mackgirl 2008-02-21 ch 10, | abuseI loved the bet between Harry and Ron. I liked how Ginny told Harry he couldn't break Scorpius' legs, or have James do it. I loved the convo between Ginny and James and how the whole school is abuz about Lily and Scorpius. Great job. |