Im loving this so far, even though ive only read 5 chapters. I actually think it is a passable Warriors story. I had to stop myself from reading at the end of this chapter and tell myself, "Wait a minute, this is Fanfiction." So Im going to continue reading, and review when it seems necessary.

This chapter was great!

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Wow. Really good story! I loved the plot, and Runningshadow is an awesome character. The ending was great!

The whole idea about "roving males" is really cool too. This story was wonderfully written, and I loved it.

Anyway, I can't wait to find out what happens next! Gonna go read the next one!

very nice! Can't wait for the next story!

Oh, new story! Woot!

Good job on this one!

very nice book!!
cant wait to read the next one!!

Ah, yay. ShadowClan attacks.

This is a great story,but the only thing that I can find wrong is there are too many cats in the clan.

"Overview: Runningpaw is being held back from being a warrior. Why is he angry? Because his two best friends were made warriors before him. Suddenly, a terrible tragedy happens, and Runningpaw is instantly guilty he ever hated the two warriors. Meanwhile, while trying to uncover his mysterious past, Runningpaw finds out something that be best kept secret about his father…and also, a new kittypet has joined the Clan. Will Runningpaw risk making a fool of himself and defending her, or will he just leave the kittypet to be taunted by her own Clanmates? Find out all of this and more in the fanfic In Shadows of a Traitor." that's your overview, no?

I like the story, but I just have to advise you about the summery. You need to try to avoid giving out the obvious choice. For instance, a tragedy that makes him guilty? I can tell just from that that his friends will either die or be wounded very badly. You've also let into too many parts of the plot. Stick to the overall view of the story instead of focusing on all of the twists and details. It's also obvious he will stick up for the kittypet.

Honor systems are easy to figure out.
I really like the story, I'm just pointing out some friendly advise.

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Cliffhangers are evil

But I love this fanfic!

Grr...

I'm going to MURDER Hurricanesong!

oh no not the kits!

what really happened to runningpaws eye?

OH NO!

AHH

Wait, where did his bloody eye come from?

That was good! Are you going to make a sequel/ I hope you really do. Here are some kits names.
Smokekit, Starkit, Hazelkit, Nightkit, Hollykit, Lionkit, Sandkit, Squirrelit, and Leafkit.