Your story is AMAZING! You're penmanship really make me want to read more. Truly, your best work! ;P

sorry for not reviewing sooner, lots of work that's calling

great story so far... I guess Akkarin will die like in the books?
curious what will happen next

Great chapter just one thing, you know when you said; "I'm sorry for the clock and dagger routine," i think you meant cloak and dagger lol =)

Wow a lots happened, so now Sonea's going into exile?
Great so far, i like the new twist, just one hing you know how you skipped a year, nothing of importance happned then did it?
Keep up the good work =)

Great story so far, things are moving quite quickly,
i thought that chapter 7 ould actually be the duel, but it wasnt *sniff sniff*, ahh well i suppose its got us hyped up for the next one,
keep up the great work =)

Well, could be interesting if Makan is a "lad" and falling for Wynn... or maybe he's just "straight" and they both fall for Sonea?
Or Makan thinks being friends with Sonea is a little to much trouble in his life...
Or Wynn and Makan are best friends (trusting another person with his life, something that way) and he fears now that he could loose this to Sonea...

That's great! Keep up the good work.
By the way... why speaks Wynn "slum-slang"?
Did he lived there?

Hey though i'd be the first to review,
i checked this out like you asked me to, and it is really good,
and i'm not even just saying it either, i really want to read the Black Magician triogy now, but alas i've got to finish Priestess of the white quick time before you decide to hold The last of the Wilds ransom or something, i still havnt finished snakehead but i'm going to carry on with POTW first, anyway tc and keep up the great work =)