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Reviews For: Trouble

Lady Clark-Weasley of Books 2008-07-24 ch 6,	abuseaw poor tor
xxbubblegumxx 2008-07-18 ch 1,	abuseWOW!! Thats really good!! Writing as Tor! I think youu shoudl finish the story! :D
friends-girl2008 2008-06-13 ch 5,	abuseThis is very good. Any chance of you continuing? Please?
Lady Clark-Weasley of Books 2008-05-18 ch 5,	abusebrill chapter update soon
Lady Clark-Weasley of Books 2008-03-19 ch 4,	abusefinally you have updated. great chapter, you really don't like jacob much do you?
Princess Amethyst 2008-03-11 ch 3,	abuseOMG! So glad someone decided to write an Allys World fanfic that was actually GOOD! This is good stuff, actually, a really original idea. Can you keep this coming? I'm really enjoying it.
Lady Clark-Weasley of Books 2008-02-16 ch 3,	abuseaw go tor! what happened to that guy kyra dated during the fouteenth book? update soon
froga10t 2008-02-03 ch 2,	abusethis is an intriguing story, i would love to read more soon... hey wait, that makes me sound abotu forty five. start again... hey, that was great! i really like the way you sped thinsg up to explain how everyone was etc and tor seemed very much like he is shown in the books. this sounds really interesting and i cant wait for you to write more! have you read harry potter? if you have, please read my story and poems! i am very proud of them! ~froga10t ps ill write a better, more detailed review when you do more on the story, but there honestly wasnt much to say (i mean grammar etc mistakes) about this, except keep up the fab work!
Lady Clark-Weasley of Books 2008-02-03 ch 2,	abusetor isn't really used to girls is he? i take it you don't like jacob much, personally i don't care much about him i mean he was nice and all but he's name? yuck. will any of ally's friends make an appearance?
Lady Clark-Weasley of Books 2008-02-03 ch 1,	abuseaw it's nice to hear from tors point of view. please update soon

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