Hi, even though I've never seen the show before, I liked your story! I liked your portrayal of Cameron, and how the thoughts going on inside her head contrast deeply with her actions. Your contrasting House and Wilson was very nice and clear, too. As I read, I noticed a lot about your writing style; it's tough and "unadorned" in contrast to some writers who smother their pieces with poetic description (not saying that style is bad either). Anyway, very refreshing. Er, Cameron was nicely developed too. I always like the docile characters (dunno why), and I can definitely say that your Cameron is a very unique take on the doormat! With some adding and taking out (try cutting down on swearing; it trips people up), this story could have a big potential. Keep it up!! ^__^

I really enjoyed this. Great writing! I especially liked how you kinda "chopped" it into little bits. It fit and worked well. Keep up the great writing!

I really like this. great job. :]

THAT was fantastic! Not at all what I was expecting... but surprisingly believable. Cam isn't my favourite character, but I liked this insight into her.

Love the sparse writing style and the short, clipped sections, they really suited the story telling.

Not to mention HOT, in a very stylish way.

If this is your first attempt in this style then I certainly hope you'll be doing more!