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Lasgalendil
2009-04-03 . chapter 1
This was certainly an interesting piece! I loved hearing his nervousness about her upcoming potential marriage-not for her safety and security, but her interest! 'Now if only he could convince her of these facts.' Very humorous!

I would only suggest one thing: make this last line a separate paragraph. I think you'll find this heightens the irony of this last sentence.
Governorsdaughter
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
I LOVE it! Wonderful job!
meowbooks
2008-02-04 . chapter 1
This is very sweet. Well done.
Arquenniel
2008-02-02 . chapter 1
This was very insightful and I really like the title. I don't think we get enough of the Governor's POV. Nice work!
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