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| BlackxValentine 2008-05-19 ch 2, | abuseI LOVED IT! and great idea...about the brothers by soul thing that was really clever..LOL |
| vincents1lover 2008-04-11 ch 2, | abuseNUMBER TWO!NUMBER TWOO!*scretch*NUMBER TWOO!!PLEASE I LOVE UR WRITING SO M |
| vincents1lover 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseEMO!!lol joking, tis sweet! I DON"T ** CARE IF ITS BEEN DONE BEFORE ITS STILL ASOME!!WE NEED MORE OF THESE! I LOVE!! |
| Zafiro Okami 2008-03-16 ch 2, | abuse^.^ |
| xcloudx 2008-03-14 ch 2, | abuseWait...this chapter is based on after the movie? And I think a chapter about jack being drunk would be funny...or really good if it was angsty. XD |
| Umi Pryde 2008-02-26 ch 2, | abusethe jacket or christmas would be fun. this is a fun collection - keep them coming. |
| Brown-Eyed Angel1234 2008-02-03 ch 2, | abuseI love that you didn't kill him. I hate the movie because they killed him. Any ways, i hope you continue this, i really like your writing style. |
| Sakurabound 2008-02-02 ch 2, | abuseThis is really good, and emotional! I think you should write Jack drinks Jack, and the first christmas! lol Abbz |
| lovePEOPLEandCOWBOY 2008-02-02 ch 2, | abusebravo. J'aime beaucoup la distance que Jack essaie de mettre en eux, sans vraiment y parvenir vu qu'il désire être le frère des autres gars. On sent bien le désir et la crainte d'être trompé. C'est bien ^^ |
| Ghostwriter 2008-02-02 ch 2, | abuseDo all of 'em! And yay! Jack's alive! No complaints here. Catch ya on the flip side. |