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| Jessie 2008-06-22 ch 29, anon. | abuseYou apologized for the strong reaction of the team, but I liked it...can't exactaly tell you why, I just did. It seems like the way they would react. |
| GSR4Ever2874 2008-06-12 ch 41, | abuseAw...! I loved it! Keep on writing! =] |
| caro-gsr 2008-04-04 ch 41, | abuseaw great ending! Sorry I didn't review before but I didn't have the time! I'm all in for the sequel... I'll read it tomorrow! Great story this one ;D |
| ishotsherlock 2008-04-01 ch 41, | abuseloved the whole story it was great, love the way you draw us into it, and will be waiting patiently for the sequell. AKE:D |
| csifan2694 2008-03-31 ch 41, | abuseit was an awesome story! I will be on the lookout for that sequel! i really liked it, and u r an awesome writer!! Viki |
| csifan2694 2008-03-31 ch 40, | abuseo, i can't wait to see who it is!! Viki |
| toothchick 2008-03-31 ch 41, | abuseThank you for a beautiful story. I will be waiting for the sequel... |
| WalkerTRngr 2008-03-31 ch 41, | abuseAMAZING STORY!! You have done a fantastic job!! |
| loubric 2008-03-31 ch 41, | abuseHey... I loved where you went witheverything. SOrry I didn't reply. Our computer crashed and we only just got a new one. Cost us a bloddy fortune and now the cat is sick too. Nothing is going right for me ... except your story which made my day! I'll e-mail soon. Lou xx |
| CJS-DEPPendent 2008-03-31 ch 41, | abuseHey, sorry to see the end of that! It was great, but i agree, it's difficult to write charachters that don't really do much (i.e. newborns) :P I look forward to reading the sequel and thanks for the mention ;) Great job! CJS-DEPPendant |
| My Kate 2008-03-31 ch 41, | abusewhat a wonderful place to end this wonderful tale...thanks for the story...looking forward to the sequel...and the big bad Ecklie...great job...I really enjoyed it! |
| My Kate 2008-03-31 ch 40, | abusenot good, not good, not good...if that shadow is Ecklie, it is definitely not good...this chapter, however, WAS good...no, it was better than that...a soothing look at their ever-changing family life...maybe Gil should quit and do consulting on the side...then they could stay home together...sigh...love this little family...please take care of them...(and could that other emotion be...jealousy?) |
| billiebeesaved 2008-03-31 ch 41, | abuseGood Story!! I cant wait to see the sequel!! |
| CSIGeekFan 2008-03-31 ch 41, | abuseYou're welcome. Don't worry about the abrupt ending. It's been a joy to read your story. Truly, thank you for taking the time to write it. |
| Wander52 2008-03-31 ch 41, | abuseWhat a great story...can't wait for the sequel...get some rest. |