HAHA! I like the last few lines!

This is awsome, wonderful writing. Update soon!

Heh, I can't wait for the next chapter! :3
SO yeah... That means I liked it o.O;;

ooh crafty basterd he iz likeing the story so far plz update soon
your doing a great job

So far, its beyond GREAT!

:D
and its only the second chapter! haha!

I will definitely keep this story on alert :]


-B

You should make a Joker story like this.


Update soon..ugh..JC is hot!

it was a little short, but me likes! i wonder whta will happen next *gasp* update son!

-Rabbott

hey-hey! Really liking this! not incredibly humourous, but a good opener and really cool, can't wait to read more. You write really well!

Rabbot

Oh, my goodness! ADD MORE! It's very well-written, especially the dialogue. We never got a sense of Crane's personality in the movie (I guess most filmmakers don't want their audience to become attatched to the villain so that makes sense) so I love this take on the character! KEEP IT UP!

Cool! I'm in a story! No, I'm kidding... I like this story. really great so far.

Please continue with this story.Pretty please!I like how Jonathan and Lynn interact with each other,especially how Jonathan was cooly analyzing her in the park.Just a teeny tiny criticism...I think that it would've been a little more poignant for Lynn if she was either a runaway or her mother had thrown her out,instead of just having boy trouble.I think that way Jonathan would've been(maybe)a little more sympathetic.This way I think he just offered her a place to sleep because he doesn't want her going to the cops.I never thought how Jonathan wouldn't have been able to relieve himself properly with his arms still bound.Too much information,is right!lol.p.s.I can't really picture his apartment either except that it would be very neat and have a whole lotta books.p.p.s.I guess Jonathan doesn't have much in the way of casual wear i.e.jeans,sweatshirts ect.Unless he was planning on going out again hence the suit.If he did dress casual I always pictured him dressed like Methos...pullover sweaters(a size too big)and jeans.But that's me.Jonathan Crane would look good in anything(or nothing) *blushes fiercely at the thought*.^_^ Update soon please!

yay!

update soon, this is getting me hooked and ya need to reel in the fans!

:P

oh, please continue this! a very intriguing debut.

:D I'm utterly loving this. Keep going- or I'll kill you!

...Or, you know, just be upset :(

AWESOME!

UPDATE! ^_^