Wow, this is really disgusting and melodramatic. Fanfic is fun and challenging when you're trying to make it sound like it would actually be part of the show, but when you just make it a bunch of crazy shit that would never ever happen on the show, what's the point? Can't you just make up your own characters? This is so far removed from South Park and the characters have so little in common with the ones created by Trey Parker and Matt Stone, it's embarrassing. This actually is a good story, but there's no reason you have to use South Park characters.

OMG, I'm dying to find out what happens next! THIS IS JUST WAY TOO MUCH PRESSURE! :)

I really like this story. It's very mysterious and I like how you go through all of Kyle's emotions. Great job! I can't wait to read more. I wonder when Cartman comes in to the story...

wont they ever find out whodunit
was it gregory from the movie
or cartman
or wendy
or TRENT BOYETTE!

Wow, I seriously thought you'd never continue this story, but here you are. This was a wonderful chapter and I love the never ending turmoil you built in Kyle and how everything he's ever done in his life somehow revolved around Stan's demise. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

very very good

gettin betta

this is really good. update soon?!

Update please update! I beg of you=:):):)

Woah, disturbing... I liked it.

It would be nice to see some more chapters...

Dude... That's fucking awsome.
It's exactly ehat i was looking for; a mature, emotional, plottie story based on the already existant interaction of the south park characters from one side, but innovative and original on the other.
I really liked the story-line, although it was a little predictible... Never mind- a great plot anyways.
Talking about the plot, i really would like to have Kyle investigate Stan's (conspiracy?) murdur and the story to be a thriller and not an engst-fanfic revolving around Kyles feelings about the murder and his new feelings for Wendi[...] like I suspect (and afraid) you're taking this story to. Please think about it either way.
I loved youre ability to keep the chracters in-character, especially Kyle, who has evolved accordingly.
One thing I think you should note is that your over-describing some of the things and in general, try letting the story flow more when there's no need for a full description of the event.
Anyway, I loved your story, I hope you'll keep writing it and make it the fanfic-masterpiece it should be.
Shalom from Israel,
Rom

I love this story. Everything is so descriptive. I especially loved how your foreshadowed Kyle finding out about Stan'd death with your description of his emotions. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next.

Very well written, I'd like to see more writing of this style from you in the future. Can't wait for the next chapter.

The gore was great. The anticipation? Ate at you as you read through the story. The fear Kyle had was almost palpable. Add that to the humor you added, and I have to say, this is damn good.

Now, where exactly you are taking this is beyond me, but I am excited to find out.

Wow this is really REALLY good. I knew something terrible was going to happen in the beginning, obviously, and having that sense of impending doom made my heart pound. You built up to that really well.

Your description of the scene was so detailed and perfect, it made me feel all disgusted, which is a good thing!

I'm excited to see where you go with this :)

Well hot diggity-daffodil. I'm lovin' this! So many adjectives and pronouns and other complicated english-related words that I don't understand. Makes me feel as though I'm in Kyle's shoes, looking at the (awesomely) gorey, brutal, bloodied corpse of a best friend and such...

Amazing dude. Simply, truely, outrageously amazing. Favourite (Author AND story), Alerts (Author AND story) and yet another addition to the C2 of freaky-greatness. You know, if that's cool with you.

I await the next chapter with bated breath and a bag full of walnuts.

OBEY THE FIST!

VIVA LA RESISTANCE!