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Reviews For: Battle Royale: USA Season 1 - Reviews: Page 1 of 9

Some Chicksta
2008-08-29
ch 38, anon.
abuseDude, update! Seriously. :P
just passing through
2008-08-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou have a good story going, but you need to stop giving so much of it away via foreshadowing. You don't need to mention how the uzi will doom both Amanda and Luke, we don't need the "little do they know..." kind of ending in each chapter.
WWW.BLONDE-GIRL
2008-07-25
ch 5,
abuseWow. Lucky Chad. GO SARAH! And i wonder who will win Adam or Trisha?
WWW.BLONDE-GIRL
2008-07-21
ch 3,
abuseWow a very dramatic start. I love your Envisioning anf seriousness. I like Xavier, since well im the cloest to him. There a few people in my school i wouldn't wanna kill. LOL. Not tht i want this to happen. Ep it'd be totally creepy and i'd totally die but GO XAVIER!
WWW.BLONDE-GIRL
2008-07-21
ch 2,
abuseWHat a creepy wy to start a trip and a totally creepy tacher
kitty
2008-05-11
ch 2, anon.
abuseIt good but I just want to say...NOT ALL CHEERLEADERS ARE BITCHS! Maybe you didnt mean this and you were just saying those five were but stereotypes get on my nerves! Great story so far though.
Gemarah
2008-04-17
ch 38, anon.
abuseI meant to say that Darla and Penny make me want to read past the parts they're in when they act like that. :p Anyway, Bye, for realz!
Gemarah
2008-04-17
ch 38, anon.
abuseHey! Dude, you totally have an awesome fic here. All your characters are amazing. Creepy but amazing. You sure do know how to write.

I was watching Battle Royale but I didn't get to see all of it because the dvd fudged on me. It was my cousin's and he didn't really take good care of it so I was left wondering who the heck survived. So I just came on to read something, and that's how I found your fic which has nothing to do with the movie but the idea was good. I was hooked when I read your summary and I haven't stopped reading it since. I hope you update soon.

I vote for Sam or Dante! Like some sort of face off between them, make her more resourceful than she already is or something.

I get so sick and tired of seeing all these umm,...well, you know, like those good guys win. They usually have some sissy lil dude win. So predictable, and I hope your story isn't like that, seriously, dude, please! No lame ** characters, at least. I mean, I was so totally wishin' for Kiriyama (in the movie) to win...maybe because that guy was hot.

But anyway, :p I hope it's Sam or Dante. Maria annoys me. What's gonna happen with Alice?

I hope you kill off Darla and Penny, I mean, do girls that age really act like that?? The sticking out of the tongues gets annoying. The characters make me want to read through whatever part they're in when they act like that.

Oh yeah, the Zeke thing...yikes! That was so gross. Cringe.

BTB, I laughed when you mentioned 2 Girls 1 Cup...*L* I haven't seen it myself. I've heard about it. I ain't watchin' it. All those reactions scared me. Have you seen it?

Anyway, that's it from moi, until next time so Pce! :)
Kar-zid
2008-04-08
ch 38,
abuseAwesome chapter! Great death scene as well, and Samantha's plan was well thought out! Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Marner
2008-04-07
ch 38,
abuseAnother one dead! I loved the line "All sinners go to hell"-it's a cliche-but it works in the story. I loved how you told Samantha's plan through the memory. I was wondering what she was planig to do-then read it. The deal with Amanda, TJ Goth, and Maria sounds like a serious of events that are adding up to something big! Good job! ^_^
The Wax Factory
2008-04-06
ch 37,
abuseI like Dante. I actually feel more sorry for him. I have a feeling he's probally going to die, though. If I had to pick one person who's going to survive, I would go with Amanda, but that would be too predictable since for all that's she's doing to everyone, she's probally going to get her comeuppance soon. I don't know, lol.

Update soon. Thanks for reading my story. :)
The Wax Factory
2008-04-05
ch 2,
abuseThis is really good. I think it was a twist how you killed Wendy and Mary-Beth, the two characters that opened the story and you expected to live. Orlando and Mary Beth's death was my favorite part.

Keep up the good story!
Marner
2008-04-04
ch 37,
abuseI know someone who acts just like Darla-only the person acts even more immature. :P

I like Dante's character-he has that sad boy image as well as that insane killer-it works great!

What does Maria do! You can't just end it like that! Great job on the suspense.
Kar-zid
2008-04-03
ch 37,
abuseGreat chapter, I wonder if Dante will catch Kelly! Update soon!
Galantria
2008-04-01
ch 36,
abuseI loved this chapter. I'm starting to like Dante more because Trisha definitely had it coming, lol. I envy your updating quickly abilities haha. The Trisha death scene was really cool. It seemed right that Dante kicked her so he wouldn't have to look at her. Updates?
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