 smithsbabe65 2008-02-05 . chapter 1Oh wow -- this was surprisingly good. In fact it was rather terrific. I'm personally not a big fan of the Hiro/Kensei storyline (and quite frankly it singlehandlely brought down Season 2 in my humble estimation), but your take on it was quite tragic.
Although the premise was based on "Groundhog Day", the story resembled it's much darker and more dramatic counterpart, "The Butterfly Effect".
Again you did a stupendous job with keeping the major players in character. You really have a knack for maintaining the true tone of their "voices" throughout.
Well done, Vixen, well done! |