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| Red and Gold Phoenix 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseHmm. I havn't beaten the game yet but I love this fic! I love Lin and I was so happy that she was in this! I think you wrote her perfectly! Very nice! Poor Penny that's so sad! I hope you write another DoR fic! WE NEED MORE! RED AND GOLD PHOENIX |
| Finalbioshadow-X30XX 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseSomehow, you got into Penny's head really well, she is just like in the game, you didn't made her "less" insane or anything, and the fic is really good too, I wished it wasn't a one-shot |
| spicebean 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseAw...I would have never guessed that it would be the bear that got lost like that. I'm sure Evans didn't, either. This was really well written, and excellent. I enjoyed reading this. ;_; |
| Eiyuu Kou 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseNice story about her conversion after the game ends but before "One year later...". It was quite kept in-character. Too bad it's one-shot, I would of like to have seen more of the reconstruction. |
| Leprichaun 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseAww... Poor Penny...*sniff* She got hit by meany, and then she lost Mr. Bear!*sniff* It makes me want to cry. |