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Reviews For: The Protector

Red and Gold Phoenix
2008-02-29
ch 1,
abuseHmm. I havn't beaten the game yet but I love this fic! I love Lin and I was so happy that she was in this! I think you wrote her perfectly! Very nice! Poor Penny that's so sad! I hope you write another DoR fic! WE NEED MORE!
RED AND GOLD PHOENIX
Finalbioshadow-X30XX
2008-02-19
ch 1,
abuseSomehow, you got into Penny's head really well, she is just like in the game, you didn't made her "less" insane or anything, and the fic is really good too, I wished it wasn't a one-shot
spicebean
2008-02-07
ch 1,
abuseAw...I would have never guessed that it would be the bear that got lost like that. I'm sure Evans didn't, either. This was really well written, and excellent. I enjoyed reading this. ;_;
Eiyuu Kou
2008-02-05
ch 1,
abuseNice story about her conversion after the game ends but before "One year later...". It was quite kept in-character. Too bad it's one-shot, I would of like to have seen more of the reconstruction.
Leprichaun
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abuseAww... Poor Penny...*sniff* She got hit by meany, and then she lost Mr. Bear!*sniff* It makes me want to cry.
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