Discontinued? that words not in my vocabulary..lol I really love it and even though you don't plan to finish it, 'even though i think you should',I loved it. A sad start but love the drama and feel you gave the story. It really is a great start and I do wish you would finish it, even though it has been years since you wrote this. Still thought it deserved a review because of the way it was wonderfully written. Any ways hope you get this and do think about updating a second chapter to it. Later

PLZ UPDATE SOON I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER!

update soon please i lvoe this storie!

plz update

WOW, WHAT A SAD START. SO SEVERAL OF THE Z FIGHTERS ARE DEAD, BUT ISN'T GOHAN AND VEGETA SUPER SAIYANS? OR ARE THEY JUST REGULAR HUMANS FOR THIS STORY? WHY WERE THE GUN-TOTING MEN ATTACKING THE CITY? CERTAINLY A LOT OF DRAMA.

Are you going to finish this? Is that a yes I hear?

I LOVE IT! So spiffy! More! Now! Please! _

Really good story so far. Please email me at when you write the next chapter.

i love the way that its going. i think that it would be kool, however, if vegeta some how learned that pan was gokus grand child. it would make it a little more...interesting. i think? never mind, dont listen to me, i really dont know what im talking about. anyways, great fic, add more! NOW!

love this story...it's sad for Pan what happend to her...but now she has some friends and maybe she'll open up to people more...well please update soon..._...and please e-mail when you have a new chappy...

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Ah, yes, you've just gotta love conflicts. I know I sure do and I really like yours! i'm loving this story more and more...

Ha! I really enjoyed that chapter. You've got some humor, a little taste of action (even if it was just someone being flipped, it was hella nice), and I've gotta say, you write very well.

A little bit confusing at first... but it still looks promising! I'm looking forward to the later chapters.

Man... it's nice to find some original work. All that cliched stuff has really gotten boring. Nice beginning!

Hmmmm...it seems that trunks has taken a liking to the new recruit...*sighs*...unfortunately i think it's gonna take a lot more than a passing interest to gain pan's trust...A LOT more...*sighs*...well, i think this story is building up quite nicely...i can't wait to see how pan's training goes...i hope she blows everyone away...not literally of course...*winks*...anywho...SENSATIONAL CHAPPY!...i am LOVING THIS FICCY!...good luck with the reviews!...gotta go...later peep...;D