Hi! Wow, I don’t know what you did but keep doing it. I loved the scene where Buliwyf appeared behind her. That's so him. ^^ I really liked that chapter. And jeez...that’s a cliffi alright. ^^ I hope you'll post the next chapter soon. ^^I’m really curious in what direction you will lead this story... please keep on writing!

Hi,mh...I think you are getting Buliwyfs ooc-ness under control , but I think she is a bit too outspoken for a woman of the 9th century, especially from Bagdad. But, as I said before, I will continue reading and form my opinion... , its not bad though

Hi, mhh...not bad. But Buliwyf is a bit ooc. Don't remember him being so talkative. But I will read on and see for meself.

Hi there! I so much love this movie and I totally agree with you, Buliwyf didn’t die! I’m so glad to have found a story about my favorite movie!! This first chapter is not bad...I quite enjoy Ahameds sister and I’m really curious about her savior ^^, I will definitely read on and, of course, give you a review.

i love it! Update Soon!

hi,

long time no see! Have you not a chapter 5 to publish!

Pretty please!

Hi,


A little chapter please?

I love that girl. It must have nearly killed her to actually apologize. And that was fun puttin gin the "I'm supposed to be dead" line. It made me giggle.

Oh yes! It was so great! I loved it!
I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next! Will they go back to the village accross the sea or not?

keep writing! I want a chapter 5!

amanda

It was so great!
I positively loved it!

It was funny, scary, etc...

I can't wait for the fourth chapter!

amanda

yeah! it's finally been updated. That was an interesting turn you had. Please continue your story.

hi,

I love this fic when will you post the third chapter?

I love your fic, could you tell me when you will post the third chapter?

I really want to read the next!

Hi,


I really want to read the next chapter! I love buliwyf!

I WANT THE CHAPTER THREE!
It is a so good story! I like lushia's character so much!
Are Herger and Heath alive or dead?


Please a 3th chapter!