lol that was actually quite cute

I don't know where to start. This is amazing. A well written piece. I'm actually thanking you for writing this.

~ Jeani

Cute! This is definitely a rare paring so it's always neat to see. Comments as I read:

“This little devil belong to you, Stranger?” and Leon's response made me laugh.

I can't believe Leon shot her. I guess it was bound to happen sometime.

It's funny how their opinions of the merchant have completely reversed at the end.

This was a lot of fun to read. I enjoy your light humor/irony and the way you write Ashley, completely IC but more developed than in the game. Are you planning to write any more RE4 stories?

I. LOve. The. MERCHANT!

Haha, that was wesome. I always wondered about that merchant too...and I laughed my ass off when he accidently got stabbed and my step dad thought he'd killed him for the rest of the game.

Ah...that was good.

Wonderful story! I love how Ashley keeps changing her mind! =D

Wonderful even within its unbeta'd status. I love it. 'Little Devil' fits the ever-feisty Miss Graham, and it is rather refreshing to see a fan-created Leon that does not hate Ashley's guts. (Honestly, I did not find Ashley too annoying. In fact, I find myself as a fan...)

The surge of jealousy radiating from Leon caused my inner LeonXAshley fan to smile.

Well-written, in-character, and a delightful read. *Faved* Because of you, this pairing, (Alongside LeonXAshley and LuisXAshley) is on my list to make more popular. 8)

I would like to see more Resident Evil/Biohazard/ Whatever-the-Hell-you-want-to-call-it from you. You are incredibly talented.

I just wanted to inform you that you're incredibly freaking awesome. Thank you, thank you for sharing your creativity!

(The random surge of jealousy from Leon at the end made me lol hard, too. :P)

That was...odd. But good! A little but corny at times with his "little devil" lines but I still liked it.

Really great story, you did a good job ^_^

Lol, I loved this. The merchant is hilarious XD

You should write more resident evil 4 oneshots--especialy AshleyLeon ones! :D

(you're probably the only other person I know who likes AshleyLeon lol)

That was brilliant! I didn't get to see much of Leon and Ashley's journey back from the church, but you described the atmosphere perfectly and the creepy Merchant. x

This story was excellent and well written. The plot line was really well thought out also, which made the story seem altogether...excellent. Please write another chapter because I want to read on...

So cute, hehe I actually kind of had a fan-girly moment when I saw what pairing it was xD man..I wish The Merchant was real, I'd love to have him wink at me ~

Wow that was new.I like it!The merchant and Ashley.I think I see only one more with that pair.