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| ishmaranara 2008-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseAn interesting show from a character missing the illusion parade, and a good job having him see through it quickly. |
| IamBor3D 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abusewoah! i can't believe im THAT slow at reviews... i bet you wulda thought i'd be reviewing faster huh? >.< xD.. normally i would... T^T i was crushed by the horrible wrath or yr 9 h/w (a.k.a: english)... WAH! |
| kokoronagomu 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abusei don't know... she was the wind, who's to say she didn't just transform into her true form... still free. a pleasure as always, ginny |
| sugarsweet pie 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseheh. Sessh betraying his teen romance issues XD... good one. not too unbeleivable--seeing as he's been showing more emotion in the latest chapters. forgot to mention--he said, ''you idiot!'' to kagome on chap 538 for slipping while trying to get Tetsusaiga to inuaysha. i said it was a curse on his part XD; but that's what i had been referring to...yeah o__o anyways--where the hell is rin?!! D: and why the hell did sessh leave her like that?! >< curse him! |
| ForgottenKaze 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abusePretty good, tho' I'm about 200 chapters away... So it didn't make sense... (Have I told you why I don't read IY online?) Yes, it is a very pretty picture! ^_^ |
| Yideungbyung Kim 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseoh. another update! ^^ yay! *HUGS* And yeah, Naraku would really try a dirty trick like that. But Sesshoumaru, ever the keen guy he is, sees thru it. I really loved the emotions you wrote when Sess was seeing Kagura for the "second" time. Well played and I can see him reeling in shock at it. Good fic! ^^ Kim |
| AquaWater99 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuse... Ok? I don't 100% get it. What does it mean when the image just evaporated, not shredded? Other than that, I give this fanfic an A-, in truth! ~AquaWater99 |
| OKIoki 2008-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseSimply love it. Your style is beautiful! Small and short description that holds so much power and impact, it reflects Sesshoumaru's nature!! I love it! And I saw the pic on Deviant Art, you captured it wonderfully! Right on the T! |
| soojinyeh 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseNaraku WOULD try something like that... he. It'd be great if she came back though. Would you mind being a sub-RPGer as Sesshomaru in my RPG? |
| NaussicaVOW 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was... interesting O.o I didn't really understand what was going on, Sorry. |