aw... it's a sad ending, but it's also very fitting and pretty.

How the heck am I supposed to explain why I'm crying to my teacher?
Bah.

Nice fic.

Very sad ending to your poem story.

Sad, but sweet.

Poor Winry...

aw... hadn't pegged Winry for the literary type but this story is beautiful.

Sad, yet accurate.

it's good, but the format is a little confusing.

Hm, very interesting...

you always get me to like stuff I wouldn't normally care for, like your love Ed/Win and winry centric fics. I like this idea, and I think writer!Win is a very unique perspective on her character.